a nobody plus a nobody equals a somebody

By Rebel tiGer King

Hello woman in the fog.
who are you?
a nobody like me?
finally another one.
i was begining to wonder,
who i was suppose to share
the world with?
besides its too big
to finish it
all by myself.

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© 2008 Rebell tiGer King
Published on Sunday, June 29, 2008.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • Narcissa On Saturday, January 30, 2010, Narcissa (404)By person wrote:

    I still love this you know...

  • A former member wrote: i love that first line.. this feels like a song.. i got goosebumps..

  • A former member wrote: diaphanous, yet perfectly formed. i love these succinct little gems; so precious, so perfect. ness

  • Narcissa On Sunday, June 29, 2008, Narcissa (404)By person wrote:

    I Love this...I have no other words for it.

  • A former member wrote: This is my mentality all over, pretty much how i see myself. And if you see this may i ask good sir where the heck are your works, i've been to your page numerous times over the past week and found everything except your line up, i'm a bit of a dead-shit at times but it's generally a given....so mentor "R>T>king" solve my issue, i like to delve into past works.

  • Aunty Depressant On Sunday, June 29, 2008, Aunty Depressant (434)By person wrote:

    I just love the premise of title.


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