id within -out god

By elisa

when all is lost
in time
forgotten absence

a misplaced pause
on an unexpressed face
in a void of absolute
nothingness
completely - erased
in a momentary lapse
of a suicidal soul
.
a supernova thought
swallows a mind whole
.
.
all manner of matter -shattered
bare naked form -less an outline
of inner space,
dense and dark
.
a rare brilliant black
gemstone collapsed,
atom diffused atom
bled in red plasma

open mouth kisses
beyond lips
of a folded horizon

shadow | eclipse
inhaled in a deep throat drag
of a blackhole lung
with a belly swell
engorged in
silent star screams
of suffocating light


death's final demise
a hell for hell
.
in rage -less a being to hate
id within -out god

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Copyright 2005 elisa
Published on Tuesday, August 30, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Devilish On Wednesday, October 17, 2012, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    oh my god. why do you do this to me. i cant breathe elisa. inhale you exhale no way. i wanna keep you in.. fucking brilliant. your words flow like calm seas waiting to blow the earth as it settles. Scholar

  • AniDayz On Tuesday, August 30, 2005, AniDayz (812)By person wrote:

    absolutely wonderous...swimming in the deep.depth[s] of this...

  • elisa On Tuesday, August 30, 2005, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    so true...the dangerous in between.......i always fear a misfire resulting in a nuclear misunderstanding...

  • Northstar On Tuesday, August 30, 2005, Northstar (374)By person wrote:

    this reads like crossfiring synapses -- very nicely done

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