her name was cinders
By purr_verse
Tiny feline explosion
in your haphazard ebon coat,
yellow fire-eyes gleaming
with the spirit of the young;
you hardly seem to notice
the steel bars on your cage.
Six weeks old and too small
to back up the playthreats you offer
with a hiss more like a breath
and a sideways leap of challenge,
you are for a moment
the kittenqueen of the jungle;
or you would be
if nature was beneath your paws
instead of plastic.
The pound is no place for a panther,
even a domestic one
of no determined pedigree.
You always greet the staff with a purr
and a rub
and a joyous love of dinnertime,
and you greet the vet the same way;
but he does not bring you dinner.
he cannot find you a new home.
he carries you to the surgery
gently
and brings you narcotic foreversleep
through a needle almost as long as
your undersized leg.
Nothing is as still
as a dead kitten
and the distant hum of the incinerator
roars tonight.
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Comments on "her name was cinders"
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A former member wrote:
"Nothing is as still
as a dead kitten" Powerful (Still); heartbreaking, beautiful...
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On Wednesday, May 31, 2006, flying_fox
(571) wrote:
just read this again and again it has brought me undone. magical words bringing most beautiful images so that the pain which follows takes my breath away...
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On Wednesday, March 22, 2006, mozarts cat
(183) wrote:
omg .. when I clicked on this I never expected this, not in a million years .. kittenqueen .. I was free-falling through the imagery *stunning*, and somewhere in the last few lines, I forgot how to fly :( .. I'm devastated ~V
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On Thursday, August 18, 2005, Spiritus_Frumenti
(340) wrote:
so honestly devastating...-l-
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On Sunday, July 31, 2005, flying_fox
(571) wrote:
too emotional for typing. *clutches all furchildren to her heart*
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On Friday, July 22, 2005, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
the machine , the devouring machine .. to just think of the joy he would have had , and been .. the scampering , the clawing , the mad half hours ... millions upon millions of unpurred tremmors -
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On Friday, July 22, 2005, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
i know all the logic , i know all the realities , but it's a sin all the same ... ensuring for always that there will never be enough beauty in this world ... loved this ... funguy
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On Thursday, July 21, 2005, manywalks
(747) wrote:
Oh, this tears at the heart. Humane deaths my ass, superb work here, as usual.
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On Wednesday, July 20, 2005, PoeticHellion
(191) wrote:
Wow. That is so... sad... yet so angry. I really like it.
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On Monday, July 18, 2005, Sepulcrawl
(78) wrote:
This is pretty chilly. I feel I am sometimes lost. This is really a great piece. You really do need to stop by more. Wonderful as always!
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On Tuesday, July 12, 2005, blue
(1409) wrote:
Oh god, You had me smiling until the end lines.. damn, talk about dropping out the bottom! You've done your job here evoking emotion purr! ~b
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A former member wrote:
You have such a talent, dear. This seems destined to become a rare classic. You find a way of presenting your streaming thoughts, ideas, with such definition. Everything you write seems to evoke something within me..This piece is simply beyond compare
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A former member wrote:
"if nature was beneath your paws instead of plastic" Exquisite. Such sad beauty. I think I'll go adopt the entire pound.
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On Wednesday, June 22, 2005, Liz
(265) wrote:
Awww
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On Wednesday, June 22, 2005, Liz
(265) wrote:
"foreversleep, kittenqueen" I like the fake compound words. Adds to the cute-factor.
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A former member wrote:
aye..and this is why I do not give my foundlings to the pound..I find them new homes all on my own...it's sickening what we consider humane...
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A former member wrote:
"and brings you narcotic foreversleep
through a needle..." This movement is music in words. "Nothing is as still
as a dead kitten." Painfully beautiful. "if nature was beneath your paws
instead of plastic." This possesses the visual echoes of Ted Hughe
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A former member wrote:
...Ted Hughes, "When I saw little rabbits with their heads crushed on roads/I knew I rode the wheel of the galaxy." From The Scream. Your words are a creative gift in this poetic galaxy; thank you, even if this one brings tears like screams...cinders fall
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A former member wrote:
...cinders falling. And a cinder has been born, like 'tiny feline explosion', in Mephistopheles...'yellow fire-eyes gleaming.' Even if he always greets you w/ a gurgle & a purr... I'd fav this one, but am limited (sorry).
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A former member wrote:
its thoughts like these that lead me to become the crazy cat lady (must save the kitties!) :P
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On Wednesday, July 6, 2005, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
I could have saved this kitten, but didn't. I thought somebody else would take her for sure. 16 years ago, when I volunteer-worked at the RSPCA. That was it - I had to leave before I DID become the Crazy Cat Lady and take every cat home with me. I still t
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On Wednesday, July 6, 2005, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
think about her. (and the staff really did name her Cinders). I came back the next week and adopted a cat, who I still have. He turns 17 in November. :)
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A former member wrote:
Unnerving. Seems like one of those things that no one would ever want to think about, let alone write. Sick and brilliant. +T.P.U+
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On Sunday, June 19, 2005, Malice In Wonderland
(976) wrote:
fuck....*searches for a cat to hold.*
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On Sunday, June 19, 2005, birdwell
(138) wrote:
that has to be the most haunting thing i've ever read, i going to go hold my cat now ~db~
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A former member wrote:
Oh my this was pull no punches night it looks like. Very cut throat "he carries you to the surgery
gently
and brings you narcotic foreversleep" Especially dug those lines. Heh cool. -Ship
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On Sunday, June 19, 2005, Solace
(1065) wrote:
Harsh and unyielding...like ice...but with fire...loss is loss call it whatever name you will