[silver choke hazzard] (w/DoctorAsh)
By knightmirror
His wind streamed warriors he armed
--- to climb into the sofa's
with weapons of striking
--- to scorch upon the skin's of our roses
lightning lacerations fall across
--- our faces, our statues, our voices
like porcelain cheeks that
--- shatter to the tape, sticking
crying blood like the boy who
--- cried seven times
he cried wolf one to many times
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he sits within his invisible foam army
---whittling nooses
wearing his suit made of circles
---running backwards in thoughts
pondering what is next
---slamming into his reflection
to face his destruction of marbles
---chipping from the inside
he sits half awake
---half asleep in a dream of an altered state
drooling in his self proportion
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he knows not of pain
--- but only of it's inclination
sensing self destruction
--- all around him, a selfish reconstruction
tripping over the fine line thats drawn
--- across our faces
hiding subsequential evidence
--- that his actions are the very channel
within files carved out of skin
--- placed upon the table, for us to see
bloodlines exposed in lifelines in sad times
we meet
Comments on "[silver choke hazzard] (w/DoctorAsh)"
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On Tuesday, December 14, 2004, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
austere and dreamlike.........well done gentlemen...................urban
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On Tuesday, December 14, 2004, Anth
(1126) wrote:
very cool write here, my fave verse being the middle, the ending is great too, i love what youve done here, it was refreshing to read, very very good work
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A former member wrote:
Lovely work.
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On Tuesday, December 14, 2004, knightmirror
(426) wrote:
Doc...thanks for the opportunity to work with you....you weren't half as bad as you made yourself out to be...it turned out awesome...thanks again...chris
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On Tuesday, December 14, 2004, DoctorAsh
(371) wrote:
Its a pleasure doing business with you :::exchanges suit cases:::: .
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On Tuesday, December 14, 2004, Twilight
(1782) wrote:
*takes both suitcases and runs away like an crazed chicken*