[silver choke hazzard] (w/DoctorAsh)

By knightmirror

His wind streamed warriors he armed
--- to climb into the sofa's
with weapons of striking
--- to scorch upon the skin's of our roses
lightning lacerations fall across
--- our faces, our statues, our voices
like porcelain cheeks that
--- shatter to the tape, sticking
crying blood like the boy who
--- cried seven times
he cried wolf one to many times

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he sits within his invisible foam army
---whittling nooses
wearing his suit made of circles
---running backwards in thoughts
pondering what is next
---slamming into his reflection
to face his destruction of marbles
---chipping from the inside
he sits half awake
---half asleep in a dream of an altered state
drooling in his self proportion

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he knows not of pain
--- but only of it's inclination
sensing self destruction
--- all around him, a selfish reconstruction
tripping over the fine line thats drawn
--- across our faces
hiding subsequential evidence
--- that his actions are the very channel
within files carved out of skin
--- placed upon the table, for us to see
bloodlines exposed in lifelines in sad times

we meet

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Copyright 2004 knightmirror&DoctorAsh
Published on Tuesday, December 14, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • urbanhumility On Tuesday, December 14, 2004, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    austere and dreamlike.........well done gentlemen...................urban

  • Anth On Tuesday, December 14, 2004, Anth (1126)By person wrote:

    very cool write here, my fave verse being the middle, the ending is great too, i love what youve done here, it was refreshing to read, very very good work

  • A former member wrote: Lovely work.

  • knightmirror On Tuesday, December 14, 2004, knightmirror (426)By person wrote:

    Doc...thanks for the opportunity to work with you....you weren't half as bad as you made yourself out to be...it turned out awesome...thanks again...chris

  • DoctorAsh On Tuesday, December 14, 2004, DoctorAsh (371)By person wrote:

    Its a pleasure doing business with you :::exchanges suit cases:::: .

  • Twilight On Tuesday, December 14, 2004, Twilight (1782)By person wrote:

    *takes both suitcases and runs away like an crazed chicken*

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