A Night of Crystal Passion...

By Six-Out

Yea, somewhat erotic...not for the young eyes :)




The candle
gives off an orange glow
as you close your eyes
[can you see it?]

The aroma
of lust and pleasure
lingers in the air
[can you smell it?]

The sweat drips
from every pore
in exitement
[can you taste it?]

The metal and leather
flesh on flesh
burning with desire
[can you feel it?]




You wince
in pure ecstacy
as I drag the whip
slowly across your body
The blindfold masks
so every move
is a suprise

The first strike
and your arms pull
with all of your strength
agains the handcuffs
that bind you
to the bed

You arch your back
as my hand
caresses your body
I can feel the heat
and the wetness
as you moan
with my every move

I lick the sweat
off of your bare chest
as you moan
the heat of your
skin, teases my tongue
as my hand
travels down to your thighs
and softly caresses
the wetness of it all

My finger runs up your body
leaving traces of you
shimmering on your skin
and I drag my tongue
along the crevices of
your body
making you moan...moan...
so...close

You spread your legs
as I crawl between them
and slide into you
I see you bite your lip
to repress your urge
to scream in pleasure
harder...and harder
as I lick your nipples
softly nibbling
to increase the exctacy

Faster
and faster
bodies collide
the music of us
mixed with screams
of passion

...release...



I fall on the bed
next to you
and slowly uncuff you
and look at me
with intent in your eyes
and a devious grin
on your face
reaching for your whip...



"The candles are still burning"

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Copyright 2004 Six-Out
Published on Thursday, April 15, 2004.     Filed under: "Erotica" and "Poetry"
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  • silentnomore On Thursday, September 22, 2011, silentnomore (22)By person wrote:

    before i became a member I had wondered onto this website. One of the first poems i had read were written by you. I love how you explain things and ketch the moment of "exctacy". reading this reminds me of times similar to as you have told your story. very interesting read keep it up and the fans will soon grow by the digits

  • Ashteroth On Friday, February 12, 2010, Ashteroth (192)By person wrote:

    Hmmm, to be honest I have read some pieces that have made me squirm in my chair...this for me did not have that effect (though I usually really like ur works). None the less was an interesting read it's just despite the key words and all I thought it lacked a certain sensuality in the end. But each to their own, the ladies seemed to love it so thats a plus :) ~Ash

  • Cattarax On Friday, August 21, 2009, Cattarax (216)By person wrote:

    Not sure in all the time that I have been on and off here how I missed this ... haven't commented much but this .. This deserved it ... awesome ~T~

  • A former member wrote: A man after my own heart.

  • Scarrzz On Tuesday, June 24, 2008, Scarrzz (238)By person wrote:

    That rocks. I played the movie in my mind. Soft-core is so much nicer when its imaginative. Scholar

  • Niemand On Monday, October 29, 2007, Niemand (361)By person wrote:

    *blushes and grins* DAMN this was good!!-Airi

  • Daughter_Of_The_Moon On Tuesday, February 6, 2007, Daughter_Of_The_Moon (106)By person wrote:

    Not a side I've read before, but no less wonderful and ENTICING. *grins at new thoughts for Josh* -Heather-

  • Dei On Thursday, April 13, 2006, Dei (665)By person wrote:

    Im not so sure about the whips. lol the rest... "wonderful"

  • Sticky Kitty On Wednesday, August 3, 2005, Sticky Kitty (242)By person wrote:

    you're amazing when you write about sex. I want to read more of it. I keep hoping it will never end. -kitty

  • Mahakala On Monday, July 18, 2005, Mahakala (209)By person wrote:

    very erotic...I like it...no no actually I love it...*reminds self to get new whip* :P

  • Malice In Wonderland On Sunday, January 2, 2005, Malice In Wonderland (987)By person wrote:

    hm.sounds fun*grins* Scholar

  • BeautifulCalamity On Sunday, January 2, 2005, BeautifulCalamity (428)By person wrote:

    I liked how the beginning led up to the story, to your words. . it was perfect anticipation. lovely piece six, very . . bare and hot. . ;)

  • Atalanta On Friday, November 19, 2004, Atalanta (37)By person wrote:

    bondage is great! I love this Mr.Six! Another for my favorite list!

  • Lotophagi On Monday, November 1, 2004, Lotophagi (333)By person wrote:

    sexiness.... all I can say ;)

  • Northstar On Thursday, July 29, 2004, Northstar (375)By person wrote:

    my my...isnt this unexpected? Masterfully done (pardon the pun) or as you would say Shawing *winks*

  • A former member wrote: u need to do much better than this and u look good in pink... iam what to be cool beteen u but thats goging to be hard

  • Six-Out On Tuesday, June 29, 2004, Six-Out (1435)By person wrote:

    I'll take your comments to heart when you learn to speak English...or any language.

  • murder_in_clubland On Monday, June 28, 2004, murder_in_clubland (388)By person wrote:

    rawr babay! i love this...you can come stay the night in my bed i'll show you how to work a whip :D ~ss

  • NikesRain On Thursday, June 3, 2004, NikesRain (1298)By person wrote:

    my lord...like someone threw open a furnace.....it's decadent.. NR

  • glasshouse On Monday, May 31, 2004, glasshouse (548)By person wrote:

    Uh... Hot? Yes. Good word. I'm gonna... go now. -Glass

  • Drea On Monday, May 24, 2004, Drea (1443)By person wrote:

    COMMENT..now you know I have read it . lol *improper laugh*

  • CharlottesWeb On Thursday, April 29, 2004, CharlottesWeb (511)By person wrote:

    ~watches from the window~ Yup, yup...tis a keeper!

  • Amanda Parnell On Wednesday, April 28, 2004, Amanda Parnell (57)By person wrote:

    Woah..... Jon you uhh.. nevermind. *dia*

  • Midnight Shadow On Wednesday, April 21, 2004, Midnight Shadow (67)By person wrote:

    I love this poem. It is so naughty. ~Midnight Shadow~

  • A former member wrote: Candles huh?... :p This is sweet :)*Lilith*

  • A former member wrote: How can something so dirty be so beautiful? So lovely. And it was in such pretty colours too! Very much the pleasure to read... ~Wish Upon A Star

  • Drea On Friday, April 16, 2004, Drea (1443)By person wrote:

    Ooooooh Kryz you lucky lukcy girl. *fans self* whew I think I need to ummm go shower...

  • Tracer On Friday, April 16, 2004, Tracer (100)By person wrote:

    Coloring made some of this the poem it is, very straight forward, never thought you the BDSM type...nice write...^vTracerv^ Scholar

  • manywalks On Friday, April 16, 2004, manywalks (750)By person wrote:

    Well, Sweetcheeks, you just cintinue to amaze don;t you. I don't recall you writing a piece quite like this before, tasty. ~ mw

  • Lynaes On Friday, April 16, 2004, Lynaes (859)By person wrote:

    Oh my.. Wow. I particularly liked the fifth stanza. Just wow. *says no more* -L

  • slow.burn.star On Friday, April 16, 2004, slow.burn.star (84)By person wrote:

    haha right on. nice one six! and you bastard im not on your favs anymore? heh.. xxxxx.

  • Six-Out On Friday, April 16, 2004, Six-Out (1435)By person wrote:

    You are, just hidden at the moment, because you weren't around for a while :P

  • cre On Friday, April 16, 2004, cre (411)By person wrote:

    hehehe so naughty! sexy ;)

  • Crystal Passion On Friday, April 16, 2004, Crystal Passion (221)By person wrote:

    JANEEEEEEEEEE HOW IVE MISSED YOU

  • flying_fox On Thursday, April 15, 2004, flying_fox (573)By person wrote:

    I'm thinking a plane ticket to Mexico is a mighty fine option right about now...

  • CorruptedLittleGirl On Thursday, April 15, 2004, CorruptedLittleGirl (253)By person wrote:

    Such a beautifully written erotic poem. You said it wasn't for young eyes, but I couldn't resist. Now please excuse me while I... ;-)

  • A former member wrote: Six. I think Kitty hacked into your account. :-P

  • Seraphic On Thursday, April 15, 2004, Seraphic (209)By person wrote:

    *subconsciously touching my thighs* wow! This is the best erotica poem I've seen yet...ooh! I love it. That 2nd stanza in red...*shivers* I really wish I wasn't alone right now :) *~seraph~*

  • nell On Thursday, April 15, 2004, nell (271)By person wrote:

    i don't think i have ever thought you could write erotica like this...mmmm the ending was delish

  • Crystal Passion On Thursday, April 15, 2004, Crystal Passion (221)By person wrote:

    Oh...oh...oh... oh no damn the candles are out now babe * falls asleep * -love crystal :D

  • murder_in_clubland On Thursday, April 15, 2004, murder_in_clubland (388)By person wrote:

    OMFG ohhhhhhh wow that was amazing I wuvvvv you.....wanna come for a visit??!@?!!?!?!~ss "the red head"

  • Crystal Passion On Thursday, April 15, 2004, Crystal Passion (221)By person wrote:

    no he cant visit... hes in MY bed duh..

  • murder_in_clubland On Thursday, April 15, 2004, murder_in_clubland (388)By person wrote:

    :O WAHHH


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