A Night of Crystal Passion...
By Six-Out
Yea, somewhat erotic...not for the young eyes :)
The candle
gives off an orange glow
as you close your eyes
[can you see it?]
The aroma
of lust and pleasure
lingers in the air
[can you smell it?]
The sweat drips
from every pore
in exitement
[can you taste it?]
The metal and leather
flesh on flesh
burning with desire
[can you feel it?]
You wince
in pure ecstacy
as I drag the whip
slowly across your body
The blindfold masks
so every move
is a suprise
The first strike
and your arms pull
with all of your strength
agains the handcuffs
that bind you
to the bed
You arch your back
as my hand
caresses your body
I can feel the heat
and the wetness
as you moan
with my every move
I lick the sweat
off of your bare chest
as you moan
the heat of your
skin, teases my tongue
as my hand
travels down to your thighs
and softly caresses
the wetness of it all
My finger runs up your body
leaving traces of you
shimmering on your skin
and I drag my tongue
along the crevices of
your body
making you moan...moan...
so...close
You spread your legs
as I crawl between them
and slide into you
I see you bite your lip
to repress your urge
to scream in pleasure
harder...and harder
as I lick your nipples
softly nibbling
to increase the exctacy
Faster
and faster
bodies collide
the music of us
mixed with screams
of passion
...release...
I fall on the bed
next to you
and slowly uncuff you
and look at me
with intent in your eyes
and a devious grin
on your face
reaching for your whip...
"The candles are still burning"
Comments on "A Night of Crystal Passion..."
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On Thursday, September 22, 2011, silentnomore
(22) wrote:
before i became a member I had wondered onto this website. One of the first poems i had read were written by you. I love how you explain things and ketch the moment of "exctacy". reading this reminds me of times similar to as you have told your story. very interesting read keep it up and the fans will soon grow by the digits
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On Friday, February 12, 2010, Ashteroth
(190) wrote:
Hmmm, to be honest I have read some pieces that have made me squirm in my chair...this for me did not have that effect (though I usually really like ur works). None the less was an interesting read it's just despite the key words and all I thought it lacked a certain sensuality in the end. But each to their own, the ladies seemed to love it so thats a plus :) ~Ash
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On Friday, August 21, 2009, Cattarax
(210) wrote:
Not sure in all the time that I have been on and off here how I missed this ... haven't commented much but this .. This deserved it ... awesome ~T~
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A former member wrote:
A man after my own heart.
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On Tuesday, June 24, 2008, Scarrzz
(235) wrote:
That rocks. I played the movie in my mind. Soft-core is so much nicer when its imaginative.
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On Monday, October 29, 2007, Niemand
(355) wrote:
*blushes and grins* DAMN this was good!!-Airi
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On Tuesday, February 6, 2007, Daughter_Of_The_Moon
(106) wrote:
Not a side I've read before, but no less wonderful and ENTICING. *grins at new thoughts for Josh* -Heather-
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On Thursday, April 13, 2006, Dei
(663) wrote:
Im not so sure about the whips. lol the rest... "wonderful"
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On Wednesday, August 3, 2005, Sticky Kitty
(241) wrote:
you're amazing when you write about sex. I want to read more of it. I keep hoping it will never end. -kitty
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On Monday, July 18, 2005, Mahakala
(207) wrote:
very erotic...I like it...no no actually I love it...*reminds self to get new whip* :P
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On Sunday, January 2, 2005, Malice In Wonderland
(976) wrote:
hm.sounds fun*grins*
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On Sunday, January 2, 2005, BeautifulCalamity
(428) wrote:
I liked how the beginning led up to the story, to your words. . it was perfect anticipation. lovely piece six, very . . bare and hot. . ;)
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On Friday, November 19, 2004, Atalanta
(37) wrote:
bondage is great! I love this Mr.Six! Another for my favorite list!
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On Monday, November 1, 2004, Lotophagi
(333) wrote:
sexiness.... all I can say ;)
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On Thursday, July 29, 2004, Northstar
(374) wrote:
my my...isnt this unexpected? Masterfully done (pardon the pun) or as you would say Shawing *winks*
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A former member wrote:
u need to do much better than this and u look good in pink... iam what to be cool beteen u but thats goging to be hard
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On Tuesday, June 29, 2004, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
I'll take your comments to heart when you learn to speak English...or any language.
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On Monday, June 28, 2004, murder_in_clubland
(384) wrote:
rawr babay! i love this...you can come stay the night in my bed i'll show you how to work a whip :D ~ss
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On Thursday, June 3, 2004, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
my lord...like someone threw open a furnace.....it's decadent.. NR
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On Monday, May 31, 2004, glasshouse
(530) wrote:
Uh... Hot? Yes. Good word. I'm gonna... go now. -Glass
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On Monday, May 24, 2004, Drea
(1388) wrote:
COMMENT..now you know I have read it . lol *improper laugh*
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On Thursday, April 29, 2004, CharlottesWeb
(509) wrote:
~watches from the window~ Yup, yup...tis a keeper!
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On Wednesday, April 28, 2004, Amanda Parnell
(57) wrote:
Woah..... Jon you uhh.. nevermind. *dia*
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On Wednesday, April 21, 2004, Midnight Shadow
(67) wrote:
I love this poem. It is so naughty. ~Midnight Shadow~
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A former member wrote:
Candles huh?... :p This is sweet :)*Lilith*
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A former member wrote:
How can something so dirty be so beautiful? So lovely. And it was in such pretty colours too! Very much the pleasure to read... ~Wish Upon A Star
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On Friday, April 16, 2004, Drea
(1388) wrote:
Ooooooh Kryz you lucky lukcy girl. *fans self* whew I think I need to ummm go shower...
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On Friday, April 16, 2004, Tracer
(99) wrote:
Coloring made some of this the poem it is, very straight forward, never thought you the BDSM type...nice write...^vTracerv^
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On Friday, April 16, 2004, manywalks
(747) wrote:
Well, Sweetcheeks, you just cintinue to amaze don;t you. I don't recall you writing a piece quite like this before, tasty. ~ mw
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On Friday, April 16, 2004, Lynaes
(854) wrote:
Oh my.. Wow. I particularly liked the fifth stanza. Just wow. *says no more* -L
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On Friday, April 16, 2004, slow.burn.star
(84) wrote:
haha right on. nice one six! and you bastard im not on your favs anymore? heh.. xxxxx.
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On Friday, April 16, 2004, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
You are, just hidden at the moment, because you weren't around for a while :P
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On Friday, April 16, 2004, cre
(410) wrote:
hehehe so naughty! sexy ;)
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On Friday, April 16, 2004, Crystal Passion
(221) wrote:
JANEEEEEEEEEE HOW IVE MISSED YOU
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On Thursday, April 15, 2004, flying_fox
(571) wrote:
I'm thinking a plane ticket to Mexico is a mighty fine option right about now...
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On Thursday, April 15, 2004, CorruptedLittleGirl
(243) wrote:
Such a beautifully written erotic poem. You said it wasn't for young eyes, but I couldn't resist. Now please excuse me while I... ;-)
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A former member wrote:
Six. I think Kitty hacked into your account. :-P
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On Thursday, April 15, 2004, Seraphic
(209) wrote:
*subconsciously touching my thighs* wow! This is the best erotica poem I've seen yet...ooh! I love it. That 2nd stanza in red...*shivers* I really wish I wasn't alone right now :) *~seraph~*
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On Thursday, April 15, 2004, nell
(270) wrote:
i don't think i have ever thought you could write erotica like this...mmmm the ending was delish
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On Thursday, April 15, 2004, Crystal Passion
(221) wrote:
Oh...oh...oh... oh no damn the candles are out now babe * falls asleep * -love crystal :D
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On Thursday, April 15, 2004, murder_in_clubland
(384) wrote:
OMFG ohhhhhhh wow that was amazing I wuvvvv you.....wanna come for a visit??!@?!!?!?!~ss "the red head"
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On Thursday, April 15, 2004, Crystal Passion
(221) wrote:
no he cant visit... hes in MY bed duh..
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On Thursday, April 15, 2004, murder_in_clubland
(384) wrote:
:O WAHHH