A Pen, in Gravity's Hands

You know,
this is barely even
a poem,

it's more
like a pen
left in gravity's
hands

clattering on
a distant floor
in surrender.

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Published on Wednesday, April 30, 2014. Filed under: "Comedy" and "Poetry"

Day 30, of my National Poetry Month: Poem-A-Day Marathon. Thanks for toughing it out with me...and, you know, sorry for this lackluster ending.

Comments on "A Pen, in Gravity's Hands"

A former member wrote: I also think it is a fitting end to the writing month for such a short piece it delivers quite a punch which can be read many ways
On Wednesday, April 30, 2014, haunted (837) wrote:

haha yes it sounds like a tired hand needs a break, thirty days of writing can really challenge the mind. I say let gravity take it for now. lol...an excellent picture painted with this, made me smile, seeing your hand and ink so exhausted. awesome!
On Wednesday, April 30, 2014, DarkDruidess (313) wrote:

Actually I find this the perfect ending to 30 days of writing...perfect!