Metal Detector
By lupus tenebrae
I looked for the crossbones of treasure in
hiding
and found the graffiti of what once laid there.
I looked for the promise I slipped on your finger
and found that,
in dreaming, its facets were gone.
I looked for the sleep
sand that fastened my eyelids
and realized its magic was never enough
to gain back the hours I lost over searching
and sifting through
ashes and seashells...for us.
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Copyright 2012 lupus tenebrae
Author's Note:
Probably my last post until next month, when I'll have more money. It's not bad, in my opinion.Comments on "Metal Detector"
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On Wednesday, July 3, 2013, dalphon
(70) wrote:
short, but powerful, my favorite drug :) Excellent!!
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A former member wrote:
i so much enjoy your writes. they take me to other places and make me feel so calm and cool. they have a wonderful tonality to them. thanks.
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On Tuesday, October 23, 2012, Northstar
(374) wrote:
this is haunting...had to reread a few times...resonates with my own aching..the imagery is intense fo sho!