glass realm

By diavolessa

I’m dead!

Now…
[L]o[V]{e} me!


I am tired, so they scream
My ears cannot take this much longer
My slender body is made out of delicate glass
Their screams, I cannot hear

The place where I live is swell
Magnificent buildings, terrific people
But they still scream
And I, just a glass ornament

I {Shatter}

They say: “Welcome to a world of glass,
and screams”
I am welcomed to the reign of Fragility
Where only words can make one cry

I will shatter
That is my faith engraved in thy tomb


[B{r}{e}{a}K]


I am just pieces now, waiting
To stain your flesh with my fragility

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Copyright 2003 diavolessa
Published on Monday, June 23, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • muckraker On Monday, July 11, 2005, muckraker (14)By person wrote:

    maybe you ought to exercise a bit and put a little muscle on, then you wouldn't be so fragile...

  • Ravenblade On Sunday, October 10, 2004, Ravenblade (313)By person wrote:

    I don't know what to say about this, it leaves me with a perfect sense of what you might have been trying to convey...>Raven

  • Midnight Phoenix On Wednesday, July 2, 2003, Midnight Phoenix (240)By person wrote:

    This piece was a little too scattered for me. I also had trouble making a connection to the realism behind the words. It maybe just me though. Keep posting!

  • A former member wrote: "To stain your flesh with my fragility." Oh so wonderful! Well done, I love the idea behind this one!

  • urbanhumility On Thursday, June 26, 2003, urbanhumility (1175)By person wrote:

    what makes one so frail?... a beautiful poem by a beautiful intellectual...............urban

  • A former member wrote: this is jusp plain beautiful my friend. It's fragile but strong at the same time. I like the way you put it! good stuff

  • diavolessa On Tuesday, June 24, 2003, diavolessa (208)By person wrote:

    you joined! yay, I am soo happy! {Darli{n}

  • DoctorAsh On Monday, June 23, 2003, DoctorAsh (373)By person wrote:

    ooo .... i likie, I LIKIE; Its like the very first bite into a freshly baked piece of brand new yummie happy pizzia: Yummie Write: [D&A]

  • Aurora_Light On Monday, June 23, 2003, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    hmmm for some reason it makes me think i like this write of ours

  • A former member wrote: cool visuals. nice write D.


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