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The nudity of you, woman
By Rebel tiGer King
Can you be less of a goddess?
If for at least a minute...
Stop
and think what i am,
when the world
revolves around your fingertips
your the galaxy to me
and could you stop to notice i am but
a start trying my best to shine
so
that you notice and give
me a wink.
Becuase yes there are hundreds of thousands
but
none like me
never like me.
Can you breathe on me like
you
did yesterday?
If at least for a second.
Start to feel
what i bring to the table of your eternity.
If at least for tonight.
Let me exist in your thoughts
like pluto
but a star
that went astray from
the nudity of who you really are.
Let me touch your lips
like the sun kisses the sky
before it
says goodnight.
Can you be less of a goddess?
And let me
create myself.
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Copyright 2010 Rebell tiGer King
Published on Monday, February 1, 2010.
Filed under:
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On Thursday, September 27, 2012, Devilish
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wrote:
Holy shit this is good.. wow. hello there you . so worthy of POD congrats baby..
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On Tuesday, February 2, 2010, sIo
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this is heartbreaking.
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A former member wrote:
The words every woman wants to hear. You said them well. It filled me with happiness. Thank you. =)
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A former member wrote:
just one of the millions huh. like the pull of gravity, the orbit of pluto around the sun. lovely
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A former member wrote:
"at least for a second, feel, what I bring to your table of eternity. if at least for tonight..." you know, this line just spins in my mind, shudders and shakes. shimmers like stars. makes me wonder about the things people never dare say.~moony
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A former member wrote:
To be a man and express this kind of longing and emotion is very hard to do well. You accomplished that here. "Because yes there are hundreds of thousands, but none like me, never like me." Perfectly expressed.. +tpu+
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