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Baby, I've fallen...
By Rebel tiGer King
Baby,
I've fallen for you.
Your voice trancends
one thousand clouds
beneath my feet.
And still your smile
anchors my heart to
your soul.
Baby,
I've fallen
for you.
You've become a part
of my skie.
Kissing the stars
above the
heavens of my
otherwise meaningless existance.
Baby,
I've been dying...
To tell you,
Your smile
begins my day.
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Copyright 2010 Rebell tiGer King
Published on Tuesday, January 26, 2010.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Baby, I've fallen..."
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A former member wrote:
Any woman you write for is lucky indeed. Amazing write. *Alice*
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On Wednesday, January 27, 2010, sIo
(898)
wrote:
this is beautiful *snuggles*
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A former member wrote:
Beautifully concluded. Though, it doesn't seem much like an ending... this poem lingers on in the most delicate and prosperous of ways. I am so glad that you're smiling again, and I do so hope that it continues. Much love.
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On Tuesday, January 26, 2010, Narcissa
(391) wrote:
Your sweet words always brings smiles ;)...someone making you smile lately??? good to hear.
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A former member wrote:
I bet you do say that to all the ladies.... lucky ladies! Beautiful write my dear. Should second stanza say "skin"? *hugs* =)
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On Tuesday, January 26, 2010, Rebel tiGer King
(239) wrote:
its correct dear, sky but spelled skie -symph-
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A former member wrote:
I bet you say that to ALL the ladies, huh?. J/K, man I really like this one.--Draven
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A former member wrote:
hahaha willy. i sense a fight coming between the girls.....*hides* this is beautiful though, lucky girl she is. *slightly jealous*~moony
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