When a poet falls in love
By Rebel tiGer King
How wonderful and magical a thing, that when a poet falls in love.
It's a gift within itself.
But if and only if the equal heart is blessed with the same name.
For then both lovers eyes can weep a thousand words to soothe each others
pain.
And together they can veil the crimson rose with shades of velvet poetry.
So long as they both breathe the selfsame air, which they shall use not
shed a single tear from eachothers eye but instead sprout a waterfall of
love form the others heart.
But careful they must be when they slep each others dreams uncoquered.
Because within those creations of the nights full moon, they'll find a
soul teeming with insecurity and weakness.
A fragile glass foundation.
But poets love is true enough to turn corroded vultures into honey laced
doves.
And strong enough to hear each others breaths within the rustling of the
autumn leaves.
Oh how wonderful and magical a thing, that when two poets fall in love.
So that they take each others hands and take flight like swans in winter
sky.
And their eyes will forever whisper a silent i love you....
Comments on "When a poet falls in love"
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A former member wrote:
Exquisitely worded, like a poet would :) Very refined and structured as well. Loved the sounds in it with the symbols (vultures & doves, etc)....
Excellent.
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On Sunday, October 17, 2010, winter_queen2010
(3) wrote:
It's beautiful. Q
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On Friday, August 13, 2010, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
"But poets love is true enough to turn corroded vultures into honey laced doves" The killer line in a magnificent piece. I felt the emotion in this one :)
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A former member wrote:
I love it. you really are talented
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On Friday, June 13, 2008, BlacK_diamond_Bay
(4) wrote:
This is beautiful dude, the images, the language, this is art _Blackdiamond_
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On Wednesday, June 4, 2008, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
a beautiful truth has been spoken...............well done...............urban
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On Tuesday, August 21, 2007, Rhys Ki
(68) wrote:
So lovely. I only wish I could receive such a feeling... Such innocence and beauty like this could justify as a meaning for love.
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A former member wrote:
This was a truly beautiful poem,even an old cynic like myself was touched! Your words hold much beauty lovely write!
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On Tuesday, August 21, 2007, darkdesires
(139) wrote:
I cmpletely know how this feels. Well put. Many kudos.
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On Monday, August 20, 2007, demonicus
(26) wrote:
may the angels of the damned weep at the sound of these words
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On Monday, August 20, 2007, GraveFlower
(240) wrote:
mmmmhhmmmm......truely beautiful....♥
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A former member wrote:
i couldn't find words beautiful enough to justify this. all i have is a million stuttering heart beats as i sink deeper and deeper with every breath. ♥
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On Monday, August 20, 2007, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
i wish your words for all......so beautiful......this could be truth........well done
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On Monday, August 20, 2007, swing_the_hammer
(48) wrote:
second that! true true so true. L