Comments by dwells
- "Reminded me of "The Abyss" movie about 15 years ago. They were able to breathe seawater after being injected with an oxygen transport enzyme, or something. Quite the painful paroxysm when taking in that first lungful.
This work was exquisite, but frozen memory seemed a bit odd, perhaps another adjective maybe? Much enjoyed, thanks RM."
Posted by dwells on "Liquid Days" by rosemaiden
- "Sounds like a sad life with a present day warning. Hoping things soon take a turn for the better and thanks for sharing this personal piece RM, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Rosemaiden" by rosemaiden
- "My kinda tree, sounds like a giant Venus fly trap perhaps? Uniquely expressive work and much enjoyed, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Mercy Tree" by rosemaiden
- "Very much enjoyed the contrasting metaphors in this piece and wishing it was longer, thanks, but quite nice as is actually, cheers! Especially like equating wisdom with longevity."
Posted by dwells on "Oh The Humanity" by rosemaiden
- "So the greatest beauty comes with the price of pain perhaps, very interesting perspective and somewhat self-deprecating. My old uncle used to say "she was a wallflower at the dance, but a dandelion in the grass" Cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Tis A Curse" by rosemaiden
- "RM I completely agree with Haunted in that your poetry is improving greatly as time goes on. Sounds like you're ready for a walk on the wild side with this one, cheers! And very well done too I might add, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Condemned Desires" by rosemaiden
- "Mamma Mia! This was worth the wait, so well done and leaves the reader panting for more, Thanks, from another forest freak (dark green my favorite color)."
Posted by dwells on "Lucid Hollow" by rosemaiden
- "Lonely and lovely expression of coming to terms with the world and life in general, thanks RM."
Posted by dwells on "Silent Cry" by rosemaiden
- "Really cool write (pun intended) and sorry your so down, but I'm sure it's only temporary. You've got a few good years left, unless I miss my guess, and thanks for sharing this."
Posted by dwells on "Shattered Light" by rosemaiden
- "The ripping kind of detracted from the tender tone, unless there is more here than meets the eye (quite possibly) - THanks."
Posted by dwells on "Fleshful Frolic" by rosemaiden
- "The third stanza tripped me up a bit, but I really enjoy the oldtimey feel to any tale of swords and sorcerers, thanks for this ."
Posted by dwells on "Battle Born" by rosemaiden
- "Unsure what turns them around in the last stanza, but many of the lines in this poem were worthy and well thought out, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Cycle Of Sorrow" by rosemaiden
- "Perfect, and not a werewolf in sight! Thanks so much for this vision of twilight in the woods, and then another day's dawning."
Posted by dwells on "Night's Evolution" by rosemaiden
- ""...caused by you" - assuming that "you" is a former lover (and not your heart's natural state) then perhaps this feeling was there from the beginning, and that it could not be overcome by the other "you", which lead to your rejection and dejection. In other words - we tend to blame others, to speak bluntly. Very thought provoking piece and thanks."
Posted by dwells on "The Heart's Lamentation" by rosemaiden
- "Don't try to explain it just enjoy it while you can. Very interesting concept to ponder, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "My Side" by rosemaiden
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