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Oh The Humanity
By rosemaiden
Time spins a treacherous web
Once you are born you are in debt
The lines in my hands
Painful strands
My heart
flows through me
All my caring, everyone wants a piece
Wisdom
and strength
Don't look at my life, look at the length
For
anyone to survive this life
Plunged into the earth a knife
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Copyright 2012 rosemaiden
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On Sunday, March 18, 2012, Shadow_Kissed5180
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wrote:
first two lines got me. this was great, could really relate to your thoughts...... great write
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On Saturday, February 11, 2012, FadedBlues
(2168) wrote:
...'everyone wants a piece': that's what makes life so tough, I guess..nice job.
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A former member wrote:
I liked the first line the best. I like references to time as an enemy to our bodies.
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On Friday, February 10, 2012, dwells
(4284) wrote:
Very much enjoyed the contrasting metaphors in this piece and wishing it was longer, thanks, but quite nice as is actually, cheers! Especially like equating wisdom with longevity.
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