The lips that stole my soul
By ANGELSLAYER
Tongue scorching
Leaving erotic scars across my flesh
As your
temptation dances before my eyes
I want the promise of your eternal
torture
With your eyes
They burn my soul
Leave me
quivering
Shameful, seamless, sputtering, gasping for air
I crave this more than the heaven I've been offered
To feel your
nails..............
Trace down my tortured skin
Breaking me open
Can you finally see what I am?
I've waited so long for
the release you're promising
In my chains
Sweat drips down
Stinging my eyes
So I can't see......... The beautiful ruin
you've made of me
Blood seeps through
The divine taste
of life
Does it make you feel alive,
To drain the sin from my
blasphemous lips?
To taste my corruption,
As you stroke
me to fatal eruption?
The seed flows forth
Across your hands
Lick it from your malicious fingers
Taste the hell that from
within me was bred
As I shudder from your milking lips
And am
consumed by your burning head
Our encounter has left me scattered,
Pieces that will never form a whole
That's what I wanted,
When
to you I sold my soul
Awards
Comments on "The lips that stole my soul"
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On Monday, March 12, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas
(293) wrote:
I need to clear some room on my favorites list because this is incredible. Twisted, erotic...word porn at its very finest!
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On Tuesday, December 20, 2011, rosemaiden
(180) wrote:
this was one of the most beautifully dark things I have ever read
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A former member wrote:
Amazing... Deep, sensual, and smooth... Great write, awesome read.
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On Wednesday, October 5, 2011, Ladyhawke
(392) wrote:
I've read this like 20 times over the period of time you've had this posted. I still can't find the words I'm looking for to describe this. You've left me speechless. Truly, a masterpiece.....
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On Friday, September 23, 2011, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
You know i had to cum back and read this again..
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A former member wrote:
Beautiful. Great flow in this one.
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On Monday, September 12, 2011, terris crimson
(167) wrote:
this is beautiful. it was definately a fascinating pleasure reading it. thank you for sharing it.
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A former member wrote:
very nice. it was awesome to read.
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A former member wrote:
haha get some, that was killer
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On Monday, July 4, 2011, Nameless Pariah
(126) wrote:
Hot damn! This was darkly erotic. And I loved every line. Ironically enough, as soon as I finished reading this fireworks went off in the sky. Happy Independence Day! (for no reason at all :P) and excellent poem.
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On Tuesday, July 5, 2011, ANGELSLAYER
(116) wrote:
Hahahaha.... What a coincidence. Thanks for the praise
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On Monday, July 4, 2011, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
I will find you... and when I do, I'm gona slide thru and snatch you up... take you somewhere and ravage you till every drop of your blood is running thru my twisted starving viens!!!
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On Monday, July 4, 2011, ANGELSLAYER
(116) wrote:
;-) Can't wait!!!!!!!