Starless Oblivion

By DarkestOnyx

crushed by a glimpse
of starless
oblivion
the tortured spirit
seeks solace
in other
ruined souls

gaping wounds
wrought by unopened
minds and
unpurged thoughts
fester in the outer shell
of a mutilated
walled in heart

cool moon
watches unfazed
as human dramas
unfold under
night sky's chilled
starry vigil

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Published on Thursday, June 24, 2010. Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

looking at the stars and started writing...

Comments on "Starless Oblivion"

On Friday, June 25, 2010, NikesRain (1240) wrote:

a lot of heaviness achieved in a smaller piece... the feel unmistakable yet it besides it weight it had a quietness to it that made it impact even more... well done
On Thursday, June 24, 2010, ANGELSLAYER (116) wrote:

This brings a nice landscape to my mind, albeit one of universal apathy, which is the way things actually work. Great job, this was wonderful