White hands stitching Crimson Xs
By Kaleidoscope_Heart
She wept with white hands
Caressing her Dolly draped with pink into
suffocation
She loved Her soÂ…
[too much perhaps]
“ You went mute too soon
Please sing againÂ…”
She sobbed for Dolly’s lost song
That still clapped in clumsy
meter
In dusty memory
White hands scratch Dolly’s
face for fragments
Of a forgotten melody,
“ Sea of flowers fall from grace
As Mother Earth turns
Her faceÂ…”
Yet Dolly’s lips remain stitched
In crimson
Xs that fixed
A Mona Lisa smile
On Her dusty textile face,
mocking perfect porcelain
[Â…but the coffee stains still remain]
She hissed in a quivered whisper
As she strangled dear
Dolly
For the lost shards of Her song
“Sing you stupid little bitch!”
White hands puncture Dolly’s chest
Exposing an artificial heart
That shrieked a rusty “Mommy!”
White
hands enflame with blood
Freeing Dolly to collect dust
Bloody hands claw her white face
Distorted in hysteric hues
As she reels, shredding brown locks of hair
“NoÂ…Stop it!”
She stitched her lips
[Art of the Innocent Hypocrite]
To
hum Dolly’s song through silk white Xs
Drowning in her sea
of flowers
As Dolly’s heart sang for hours
Awards
Comments on "White hands stitching Crimson Xs"
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On Sunday, March 18, 2012, Meshell
(34) wrote:
speechless! No words can describe this beautiful write!
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A former member wrote:
such a vivid picture you paint across the page...poor sweet dolly
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On Friday, March 7, 2008, Niemand
(355) wrote:
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On Friday, March 7, 2008, RubyXero
(481) wrote:
i agree with Dark Philosopher on that...:) your work creates such a beautiful picture. you have a way of not only drawing in your reader with whatever interesting subject for that day, but your imagery is amazing. i truely enjoy ever piece that i read from you.
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On Thursday, March 6, 2008, Taunting The Reaper
(169) wrote:
Very clever, an elaborate tale of sad dolly blues. I loved it!
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On Wednesday, March 5, 2008, denver nitze
(251) wrote:
this was an incredibly vivid childhood memory, i felt as if it were my own and went so deep in the details and the coincidence of it all, that i thought i heard my mother call me down for dinner in the distance. i was a child again for a moment cursing my doll that i broke for my fault. very very very nice write. ~ta
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On Wednesday, March 5, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus
(357) wrote:
*Is reminded of why I faved you* Excellent work...