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Moonbeams
By Ladyhawke
Starlight in your eyes
Moonlight on your skin
Showing where you are
Showing where you've been
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Copyright 2012 Ladyhawke
Published on Friday, February 10, 2012.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
Been having writers block. First thing I've written in a few weeks. I am unsure.....Comments on "Moonbeams"
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On Monday, June 26, 2023, carlosjackal
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wrote:
A lovely gem of a piece.
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On Saturday, June 9, 2012, Regnhild
(13) wrote:
Brief and Alluring... teasingly so. Loved the way you spoke so much in these few line. Your choice of words was outstanding. Thank You.
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A former member wrote:
very saying what you wanted in so few lines:D
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A former member wrote:
Wow. Just a simple four line poem, but it said so much! Perhaps written for those times, we stay up at night reflecting on the past?
I don't know if this was intentional (probably was), but I also liked how you connected starlight to a twinkling eye and moonlight to skin. A very balanced poem :)
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A former member wrote:
Well Becoming Brief and Enchanting. It sweeps the heart. Brevity with kick, you're making me an addict. Poetic inspiration is an addiction. Thoroughly Impressed repetitiously!
Thank you My Lady
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On Wednesday, February 15, 2012, sheff
(115) wrote:
leaves enough to the imaginatiion to be desired. wonderful
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On Tuesday, February 14, 2012, FadedBlues
(2169) wrote:
...the feeling of this radiates: serene & comforting...
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On Friday, February 10, 2012, Polaris
(21) wrote:
Simplicity...I like it. I love stuff about the moon. I have a poem Selene you might like. Check it out.
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On Friday, February 10, 2012, dwells
(4285) wrote:
This was exquisite and challenged the reader with a unique puzzle to make sense of things - and it makes perfect sense. Much enjoyed, cheers!
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On Friday, February 10, 2012, rosemaiden
(185) wrote:
oh my god.......that is gorgeous!.....such simple and pure beauty with little words.....absolutely splendid :)
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