Comments by Polaris
- "Simplicity...I like it. I love stuff about the moon. I have a poem Selene you might like. Check it out."
Posted by Polaris on "Moonbeams" by Ladyhawke
- "Thank you. And thanks for pointing that out. I had forgot to fix it before submitting it."
Posted by Polaris on "Selene" by Polaris
- "Thank you. I was trying to convey how guilt can overwhelm and cloud your judgement."
Posted by Polaris on "Fate" by Polaris
- "A very enjoyable read. I particularly like the line "I thought myself clever until i felt the heavy presence
of the crown of fools." Haven't we all..."
Posted by Polaris on "empty" by steven winters
- "Thank you. I know what you mean. Even with this one poem it's like a weight lifted off my shoulders. "
Posted by Polaris on "So Called Friends" by Polaris
- "Thanks. I'm a little less self conscious now, but I guess every first time writer is."
Posted by Polaris on "Resolve" by Polaris