Selene

By Polaris

Helios retires and you seize the sky
Ebbing tides of phosphorescence
I gaze unto you catatonic
Entrapped by your luminescence

As you descend and gaze upon me
I shudder in your presence  
Your calming touch dissolves my fears
As we commence our coalescence

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Copyright 2012 Polaris
Published on Monday, January 23, 2012.     Filed under: "Fantasy" and "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Saturday, November 28, 2015, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    Wonderfully crafted poem filled with charm and mystique. Excellent POTD.

  • DarkAsh On Saturday, February 11, 2012, DarkAsh (45)By person wrote:

    Really great poem! I love the rhyming scheme. Keep up the good work.

  • Ladyhawke On Saturday, February 11, 2012, Ladyhawke (392)By person wrote:

    I absolutely adore mythology and this was an excellent write. It was very mythcal and enchanting in the way you've so perfectly described everything. It truly was captivating. Thank you for recommending this piece. I am so glad I got a chance to find it. This is one true piece of art. Brava!!

  • dwells On Monday, January 23, 2012, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Well done P. and truly captivating in it's acutely accurate brevity (says a lot with little). Oh, and perhaps "catatonic" maybe? Not sure...Thanks !

  • Polaris On Monday, January 23, 2012, Polaris (21)By person wrote:

    Thank you. And thanks for pointing that out. I had forgot to fix it before submitting it.

  • A former member wrote: Very nice. Do you believe in the moon goddess?

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