Timid Galaxy

By serenesavage91

A quiet steady chorus,
Of rain on these locked doors.
The falling stars and moon light,
Shining bright, bringing fright.

A love poem is shredding,
Two hearts always fretting,
Searching always for more,
Too timid to explore.

The midnight sun is blinding,
The galaxy and all its binding,
Floating along connected,
Closely, blissfully, rejected.

Two hands reaching, seaking,
Finger tips barely meeting,
Comets through outer space,
Burning up in a nowhere place.

A quiet steady chorus,
Of silence on these locked doors,
The falling stars and moon light,
Bringing lovers in this night.
 

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Copyright 2012 serenesavage91
Published on Saturday, January 28, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • whisperingwalls On Tuesday, February 21, 2012, whisperingwalls (210)By person wrote:

    I love your galactical imagery, normally larger themes and images come off as "too much" but the way this was written deals with them so nicely, agree with dwells, nicely done!

  • dwells On Tuesday, January 31, 2012, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    This was far out and cosmic, thanks for the ride, much enjoyed - well done.

  • Polaris On Saturday, January 28, 2012, Polaris (21)By person wrote:

    I really enjoyed this. I too love to write about space and science.

  • Alchemist On Saturday, January 28, 2012, Alchemist (679)By person wrote:

    Yes, I to am a fan of space and sci-fi, thanks for the fun rhymes.

  • A former member wrote: Space Is The Place, Dope Rhymez ^_^ .

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