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Resolve
By Polaris
Waking dreams of burning trees
Visions of the fall foreseen
To
my feet stained and bleeched
Encased in ashes my own greed
The sweet bitter smell of gasoline
The counsel held I did not heed
The time is now for me to leave
Regret and purpose words to keep
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Copyright 2012 Polaris
Author's Note:
My first poem ever writtenComments on "Resolve"
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On Saturday, February 11, 2012, Ladyhawke
(392)
wrote:
And this was your first poem ever written? I bow to you sir. This was a magnificent piece. Chaotic, yet a sense of some order. Puts the readers mind right there, in the heart of the poem itself. I am humbled and awed by this piece. *bows*
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On Saturday, February 11, 2012, Polaris
(21) wrote:
Thank you so much for the kind words.
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A former member wrote:
Good poetry, enjoyed the read. - Kanica .
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On Friday, January 20, 2012, veingo
(526) wrote:
Welcome to the vally. I look forward to seeing more from you. ^V^
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On Thursday, January 19, 2012, Phantasmagoria
(121) wrote:
First poem, ever? Wow, I would not have known this if you didnt say anything. You did quite well. I love anything having to do with dreams/visions. Welcome to DP :)
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On Friday, January 20, 2012, Polaris
(21) wrote:
Thanks. I'm a little less self conscious now, but I guess every first time writer is.
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