The Heart's Lamentation

By rosemaiden

The cause of this tragedy was the sorrow in my heart
I do not know why

Stories change
Time passes by

Heart yearns for an end
To this deleterious trend

Of pain and hatred
That I take to bed

Every night
Even though I fight

It clings to me
Like an unending dream

Oh heart of Mine
Why do you desire solitude?

e agony and pain

That was caused...by...you.....

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Copyright 2011 rosemaiden
Published on Wednesday, November 9, 2011.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • TyrantAvDetForbannet On Thursday, November 10, 2011, TyrantAvDetForbannet (273)By person wrote:

    Ahh yes, the hearts is the profound engines for all these emotions and more.

  • dwells On Thursday, November 10, 2011, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    "...caused by you" - assuming that "you" is a former lover (and not your heart's natural state) then perhaps this feeling was there from the beginning, and that it could not be overcome by the other "you", which lead to your rejection and dejection. In other words - we tend to blame others, to speak bluntly. Very thought provoking piece and thanks.

  • addicted_angel On Thursday, November 10, 2011, addicted_angel (21)By person wrote:

    I agree with Jade, an easy feeling to feel but a hard one to describe. Nicely written

  • whisperingwalls On Wednesday, November 9, 2011, whisperingwalls (210)By person wrote:

    pure emotion pouring to from the heart. you painted a real picture, which I was able to relate too... It has a mysterious ending, I want to read more.


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