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Rosemaiden
By rosemaiden
Breathe in my petals
Choke on my thorns
From this muddy
grave
I was born
Conceived from lust
Hatred and pain
Shines through me
My blood red stain
Beauty and
tragedy
Contorted into one
I glisten in the moonlight
And sparkle in the sun
Many admire me from afar
But those
who embrace me
Are left with scars.........
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Copyright 2012 rosemaiden
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A former member wrote:
I like poems about roses. I think the last stanza is the best.
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On Sunday, February 19, 2012, FadedBlues
(2169)
wrote:
...'conceived from lust' stands out for me: it's the way we all begin,but we hope there was a large dose of love in the mix...powerful writing...
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On Monday, February 20, 2012, rosemaiden
(185) wrote:
thanks fade....i always love your comments
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A former member wrote:
that is so cool, i love it.
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On Sunday, February 19, 2012, rosemaiden
(185) wrote:
glad you liked it...and thanks :)
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On Sunday, February 19, 2012, With love_Crow
(83) wrote:
Beautiful.
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A former member wrote:
Beautifully penned.
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On Sunday, February 19, 2012, rosemaiden
(185) wrote:
thank you sweety
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A former member wrote:
soo beautiful
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On Sunday, February 19, 2012, rosemaiden
(185) wrote:
why hello there and thanks
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On Sunday, February 19, 2012, dwells
(4285) wrote:
Sounds like a sad life with a present day warning. Hoping things soon take a turn for the better and thanks for sharing this personal piece RM, cheers!
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On Sunday, February 19, 2012, rosemaiden
(185) wrote:
i hope it does turn
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