Mercy Tree

By rosemaiden

I don't want to feel and I don't want to see
Wrap your branches around me

Take my arms then my legs
Slowly swallow me dead

Make me with nature
Peaceful and free

So I no longer feel
And no longer have to see.........

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Copyright 2012 rosemaiden
Published on Sunday, February 19, 2012.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Friday, May 13, 2016, carlosjackal (3015)By person wrote:

    More clever than first meets the eye..

  • dreadlox33 On Friday, May 13, 2016, dreadlox33 (64)By person wrote:

    I normally think a lot of the writing is rather forgetable....but I really liked this particular poem...it left an impression on my mind....I look forward to reading more of your stuff.....ian

  • dwells On Sunday, February 19, 2012, dwells (4284)By person wrote:

    My kinda tree, sounds like a giant Venus fly trap perhaps? Uniquely expressive work and much enjoyed, thanks.

  • rosemaiden On Sunday, February 19, 2012, rosemaiden (185)By person wrote:

    many thanks dwells

  • Devilish On Sunday, February 19, 2012, Devilish (2657)By person wrote:

    Love it. And i know how you feel.. sometimes i just wana be invisible.. just left be.. Hello there you sweety. Oh how we love our rosemaiden... Scholar

  • rosemaiden On Sunday, February 19, 2012, rosemaiden (185)By person wrote:

    I love you to my devil :)

  • A former member wrote: amazingly awsome

  • rosemaiden On Sunday, February 19, 2012, rosemaiden (185)By person wrote:

    thank you :)


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