Comments by dreadlox33
- "i'ts great that you have words to say......my only suggestion is to put a date and signature to your work....but that's just my opinion.....ian"
Posted by dreadlox33 on "one set in stone" by haydenhavoc
- "...Hey Phelanx...how you doing tonite....man you have an extensive listing....you arried?...ya got kids?.....what do you do for work?...or you retired?...."
Posted by dreadlox33 on "beyond Your God." by Phalanx
- "phalanx....interesting piece....but I don't think this work was intended for me...picking thru the bones...what a thought...hey...I've got a question for you...how do people send a messag to someone....I've tried writing something to someone in here under the "write" icon...do you have to know their email address?...i've tried sending a message to just their dark poetry name and it won't send...this site doesn't seem easy to contact another writer...other than in the comment section below their write...thanks...hagd...ian"
Posted by dreadlox33 on "Tree Sex" by Phalanx
- "..heh...I stopped back to look at some of your work...when I got to God...I had to look...deaf children breaking jars....and to .."not to get dirty."...I liked those lines...and the work..ian"
Posted by dreadlox33 on ""God": A term used loosely" by Phalanx
- "...I didn't find this difficult to read..it's your poem...'n you would want it to be read... maybe it's me but whenever I see "fetus" written in a poem..it's always kind of sad for the writer....I didn't feel I doubted you'd experienced this horror.... regarding the write.. watch you spelling..unless you meant it for effect...enjoyed the edginess of your write.."
Posted by dreadlox33 on "HANDS" by Carnage Amelia Diaz
- "I got to reading this and almost pushed it aside...I thought at first maye it was a little long....but then kept reading.....and it struck me a bit....I think one thing we kinda forget sometimes....we talk about love ...or never quit...but we forget the power of forgiveness...it can be very healing...the person we forgive is sometimes forever angry or hateful towards us....but our lives are more happy...when we forgive..."
Posted by dreadlox33 on "Children's promise, the loss of a friendship" by Alectozere
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