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Tornado Mentality
By rosemaiden
Stillness......Silence
Drifting......Loneliness
Breathe
in the notes
Look for hope
Dance in your mind
Not
enough time
Torn away viciously
Beat down repeatedly
Escape into reality
Unkown society
Step back and
ponder
Walk into thunder
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Copyright 2012 rosemaiden
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On Sunday, February 5, 2012, FadedBlues
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wrote:
...this is perfectly rendered, the body of the poem appearing as a tornado...I can almost see the words spinning inside it...
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On Sunday, February 5, 2012, dwells
(4284) wrote:
Marvelous metaphors expressed in this work, thanks RM.
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On Sunday, February 5, 2012, Magdalena
(614) wrote:
A wonderful write Rosemaiden.
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On Sunday, February 5, 2012, Star
(919) wrote:
beautiful this is amazing wtg :)
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On Sunday, February 5, 2012, rosemaiden
(185) wrote:
thank you
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On Sunday, February 5, 2012, Devilish
(2657) wrote:
I love your poetry .. Beautifuly expressed..
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On Sunday, February 5, 2012, rosemaiden
(185) wrote:
:) as is yours
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