Tornado Mentality

By rosemaiden

Stillness......Silence
Drifting......Loneliness

Breathe in the notes
Look for hope

Dance in your mind
Not enough time

Torn away viciously
Beat down repeatedly

Escape into reality
Unkown society

Step back and ponder
Walk into thunder

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Published on Sunday, February 5, 2012. Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"

Comments on "Tornado Mentality "

On Sunday, February 5, 2012, FadedBlues (2096) wrote:

...this is perfectly rendered, the body of the poem appearing as a tornado...I can almost see the words spinning inside it...
On Sunday, February 5, 2012, dwells (4177) wrote:

Marvelous metaphors expressed in this work, thanks RM.
On Sunday, February 5, 2012, Star (879) wrote:

beautiful this is amazing wtg :)
On Sunday, February 5, 2012, rosemaiden (180) wrote:

thank you
On Sunday, February 5, 2012, Devilish (2633) wrote:

I love your poetry .. Beautifuly expressed..
On Sunday, February 5, 2012, rosemaiden (180) wrote:

:) as is yours