Moonlight Fantasy

By rosemaiden

*sigh* so warm and comfortable here
In this forest with you breathing your air

Fingers interlocked
All memories blocked

Time is frozen in your grasp
Everyone wants these moments to last

But the moments I can't handle is when you're leaving
My soul rips open and I start bleeding

Oh the feeling of heavenly hell
You have put me under your dark spell

Your eyes look on me in wonderment
I can confide in you with all of my torments

I can lay here peacefully sleeping
While I'm protected under your dark wings

As the moon reigns over our precious darkness
I know these moments will be endless

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Copyright 2011 rosemaiden
Published on Tuesday, December 13, 2011.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • worm On Friday, September 1, 2017, worm (1194)By person wrote:

    nicely penned! write more!

  • FadedBlues On Sunday, January 22, 2012, FadedBlues (2168)By person wrote:

    Rose, 'heavenly hell': ecstacy & torment mixed into 1 devastating emotion...that's awesome!...(I've never visualized that...)

  • dwells On Tuesday, December 13, 2011, dwells (4284)By person wrote:

    Quite the idyllic fantasy expressed here, thanks for the vision.

  • A former member wrote: You are awesome rose! This melted my heart and served it up deliciously! Tyrant will love it no doubt! Beautiful from beginning to end!

  • rosemaiden On Tuesday, December 13, 2011, rosemaiden (185)By person wrote:

    thanks tr :)....i try

  • Devilish On Tuesday, December 13, 2011, Devilish (2657)By person wrote:

    Wow.. Welll well miss rose.. How lovely... Scholar

  • rosemaiden On Tuesday, December 13, 2011, rosemaiden (185)By person wrote:

    thank you :)


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