The Weald's Release

By rosemaiden

I am just a little girl in the forest
Constantly wandering with no purpose

Trees go by leering
"Why is she here, does no one want her?"

Its not that i am not wanted
Just no one has wanted me yet

I wander till darkness breaks
I then sit, ponder, and wait

Wait and hoping that the path
Will reveal itself at last

Nothing
Darkness growing

No one wanting
Nothing showing

I collapse nothing left
I close my eyes and take a breath
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Wind
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Blowing
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Leaves
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Falling
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Time goes by
Distant cries

Crow feathers
Red letters
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I awaken from your touch
Didn't take much

A brush from your spirit
When i did nothing to deserve it

Crimson heart
Black veins

Nothing to cover
The stains
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Droplets fall
Still nothing at all
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Leave it be
SetĀ free

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Copyright 2012 rosemaiden
Published on Monday, February 20, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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Comments on "The Weald's Release"

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  • A former member wrote: This is a beautiful poem!

  • whisperingwalls On Tuesday, February 21, 2012, whisperingwalls (219)By person wrote:

    This is unbelievable. I haven't visited in a while but i'm glad I came back to this. Love the tree personification, the breakdown into beat poetry, nicely done :)

  • rosemaiden On Tuesday, February 21, 2012, rosemaiden (185)By person wrote:

    thanks.....its nice to have a comment from you again :)

  • Devilish On Tuesday, February 21, 2012, Devilish (2662)By person wrote:

    Oh God hunny I fucking want you. I would take you behind one of the trees and ravage your mind for thoughts of sickness to suck out of you.. I love it..And your not a lil girl. Your a hell of a woman.. Can i come play with you.. Scholar

  • rosemaiden On Tuesday, February 21, 2012, rosemaiden (185)By person wrote:

    oh devil you can play with me behind as many trees as you want

  • A former member wrote: I thank you deeply and truly for a wonderfully penned write I can relate to. Beautifully done.

  • rosemaiden On Tuesday, February 21, 2012, rosemaiden (185)By person wrote:

    anytime hun

  • dwells On Tuesday, February 21, 2012, dwells (4288)By person wrote:

    Whimsically lonely and lovely, well done and much enjoyed.

  • rosemaiden On Tuesday, February 21, 2012, rosemaiden (185)By person wrote:

    many thanks dwells :)


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