Crazy Person's Rantings

By rosemaiden

Nothing.............sorrow in the air
You can smell it in my hair

You can see it in my eyes
Nothing was spoken but lies
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Anguish of the heart
And aching of the body

You ask how am I
And I reply
"Pretty shitty"

Go away I don't need your pity
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I need to spew this all out like vomit
Then you are free to condemn it
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I'm just here to breathe the same air
I know you don't like it and i really don't care
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Go crawl in a hole or peel off all your skin
Quit accusing me of sin

I'm not like you
I'm like me
So damnit let me be

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Published on Saturday, March 24, 2012. Filed under: "Rage" and "Poetry"

Comments on "Crazy Person's Rantings"

A former member wrote: Oh hell yeah! I was totally feeling this! I so relate!!! Rant on! :)
On Sunday, March 25, 2012, Devilish (2633) wrote:

Hell yeah.. feed me hunny. i love it..
On Sunday, March 25, 2012, dwells (4177) wrote:

I think you showed a tremendous amount of restraint, and much enjoyed the righteous rant, thanks.
A former member wrote: Nice layout. Short but strong.
On Sunday, March 25, 2012, JadedHeart (18) wrote:

I have vented similar to this. Great poem!!
A former member wrote: well go on then with your bad self.. damn... (side note) i enjoyed this.. made me think of a woman smashing stuff.. oh the good ol' days...
A former member wrote: Loved it :) very nice punctuation and I can so relate to what the narrator is saying. Like how they want to be free of people's judgement
On Saturday, March 24, 2012, FadedBlues (2096) wrote:

...better to relieve yourself of the anger than to let it fester inside...
On Saturday, March 24, 2012, ruthless48 (172) wrote:

for a 'crazy' rant ~ it sounds very sane, actually spot on! mutual insight with great formatting. thank you