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Lucid Hollow
By rosemaiden
Take my wrists bound and bloody
Cut them loose and set me free
Forest dwelling I heed your call
I run towards your great
misty hall
Leaves wet and ever flowing
Darkness and mystery
ever growing
Grab my hand I'll pull you in
Dwell with me
in my sanctum
Tragic black ripped to shreds
Love me dark
or love me dead
Wrap me in your crimson chains
To keep
me warm from your disdain
Dismantle me from my soul
You
"Saboteur of Love"
Then swallow me whole
Only to then expel........
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Copyright 2012 rosemaiden
Comments on "Lucid Hollow"
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On Tuesday, February 21, 2012, whisperingwalls
(219)
wrote:
You set a great tone in this one and you don't deviate.. I love how none of the rhymes are forced, nicely done
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A former member wrote:
I love this poem. I know where you're coming from. Thank you for ur comment on my poem
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On Sunday, February 5, 2012, rosemaiden
(185) wrote:
oh thank you :)..........and your poems are well deserved of comments
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On Tuesday, January 31, 2012, Magdalena
(614) wrote:
A captivating write so well penned.
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On Tuesday, January 31, 2012, FadedBlues
(2168) wrote:
...'Love me dark or love me dead': now that's poetic magic!...
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On Tuesday, January 31, 2012, Devilish
(2657) wrote:
YOu my dear are one dark princess.. I love it.. I'm never disappointed..
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On Tuesday, January 31, 2012, rosemaiden
(185) wrote:
Thank you my devil :)
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On Tuesday, January 31, 2012, haunted
(849) wrote:
fuck yeah,i think its safe to say maiden that this is by far my favorite poem from you! the imagery is amazing and it has a very smooth flow. and the subject matter is to die for! beautifully written maiden. and just an excellent poem!
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On Tuesday, January 31, 2012, rosemaiden
(185) wrote:
Awesome thank you that means alot
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On Monday, January 30, 2012, Phantasmagoria
(121) wrote:
I like the picture this painted in my mind, nice work :)
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On Tuesday, January 31, 2012, rosemaiden
(185) wrote:
thank you very much
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On Monday, January 30, 2012, dwells
(4284) wrote:
Mamma Mia! This was worth the wait, so well done and leaves the reader panting for more, Thanks, from another forest freak (dark green my favorite color).
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On Monday, January 30, 2012, rosemaiden
(185) wrote:
Wow thank you dwells :)
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On Monday, January 30, 2012, darling93demon
(81) wrote:
another great write :)
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On Monday, January 30, 2012, rosemaiden
(185) wrote:
thank you :)
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