Rose Petals And Silent Angels

By rosemaiden

I open my eyes to the warm forest
I feel your spirit and your embrace

I run on jeweled stepping stones made from your tears
I'm covered in fog created by your fears

Hasten! I must go before you leave
I try to catch you but fail tragically

      Water
  
                  Falls

                            With

                                    The  

                                            Dying
                  
                                                        Leaves

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Beauty in this moment of feeling 
It grips the space instead of nothing

Chest rises and falls
I still hear the calls

A rose for you
A rose for me 

Beautiful Eternity

                                                          

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Copyright 2012 rosemaiden
Published on Saturday, March 3, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Meshell On Monday, March 19, 2012, Meshell (34)By person wrote:

    BEAUTIFUL WRITE

  • dwells On Wednesday, March 7, 2012, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Magical and serenely sensual, thanks.

  • A former member wrote: i came back to say once again,beautiful lady...

  • rosemaiden On Wednesday, March 7, 2012, rosemaiden (180)By person wrote:

    aw thank you

  • FadedBlues On Tuesday, March 6, 2012, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...I like the waterfall you designed into this...spoken romantically...

  • Alchemist On Saturday, March 3, 2012, Alchemist (679)By person wrote:

    It grips the space instead of nothing, I love that line.

  • Devilish On Saturday, March 3, 2012, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Oh hunny you can fall into my lap and sit a while.. play pussy pals.. i love you sweety.. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: I love the way this is written :) Scholar

  • rosemaiden On Saturday, March 3, 2012, rosemaiden (180)By person wrote:

    thanks adamo.....oh i loved your recent poem

  • A former member wrote: it is soooooooooooooo beautiful,wellwritten,i liked it so much,and i am of the same philosophy word class

  • rosemaiden On Saturday, March 3, 2012, rosemaiden (180)By person wrote:

    oh thank you :)

  • A former member wrote: i didn't know you answered,i came back on my own,no i realy like that,it is like i wrote that,and a beautiful title


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