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Rose Petals And Silent Angels
By rosemaiden
I open my eyes to the warm forest
I feel your spirit and your embrace
I run on jeweled stepping stones made from your tears
I'm
covered in fog created by your fears
Hasten! I must go before
you leave
I try to catch you but fail tragically
Water
Falls
With
The
Dying
Leaves
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Beauty in this moment of feeling
It grips
the space instead of nothing
Chest rises and falls
I still hear
the calls
A rose for you
A rose for me
Beautiful
Eternity
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Copyright 2012 rosemaiden
Published on Saturday, March 3, 2012.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Rose Petals And Silent Angels"
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On Monday, March 19, 2012, Meshell
(34)
wrote:
BEAUTIFUL WRITE
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On Wednesday, March 7, 2012, dwells
(4284) wrote:
Magical and serenely sensual, thanks.
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A former member wrote:
i came back to say once again,beautiful lady...
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On Wednesday, March 7, 2012, rosemaiden
(185) wrote:
aw thank you
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On Tuesday, March 6, 2012, FadedBlues
(2168) wrote:
...I like the waterfall you designed into this...spoken romantically...
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On Saturday, March 3, 2012, Magdalena
(614) wrote:
Wonderful Rosemaiden....
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On Saturday, March 3, 2012, Alchemist
(688) wrote:
It grips the space instead of nothing, I love that line.
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On Saturday, March 3, 2012, Devilish
(2657) wrote:
Oh hunny you can fall into my lap and sit a while.. play pussy pals.. i love you sweety..
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A former member wrote:
I love the way this is written :)
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On Saturday, March 3, 2012, rosemaiden
(185) wrote:
thanks adamo.....oh i loved your recent poem
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A former member wrote:
it is soooooooooooooo beautiful,wellwritten,i liked it so much,and i am of the same philosophy word class
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On Saturday, March 3, 2012, rosemaiden
(185) wrote:
oh thank you :)
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A former member wrote:
i didn't know you answered,i came back on my own,no i realy like that,it is like i wrote that,and a beautiful title
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