Condemned Desires

By rosemaiden

I want to dance with the wind
I want to scream with the thunder
I want the oceans to rise up and take me under

Breathe into me spirit
Breathe into me nature
Breathe into me strong and pure

Inject the souls lost
Inject the frigid frost
Inject your darkness no matter the cost

Taint my skin with your love
Taint my heart even if it breaks
Taint my soul its never enough I'll withstand the aches

Lust for me my demon
Lust for my luscious human
Lust for the secrets hidden inside that you dare to open

Kill me with your words of fire
Kill me with your eyes of pain
Bring me back to life and please kill me again!

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Copyright 2012 rosemaiden
Published on Friday, February 3, 2012.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: " dance with the wind scream with the thunder oceans to rise up and take me under" Excellent. I can see you on the beach with a storm approaching dancing and singing. Actually that sounds like a fun thing to do.

  • rosemaiden On Saturday, February 4, 2012, rosemaiden (180)By person wrote:

    lol i've done that but not on a beach and it is very fun

  • dwells On Friday, February 3, 2012, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    RM I completely agree with Haunted in that your poetry is improving greatly as time goes on. Sounds like you're ready for a walk on the wild side with this one, cheers! And very well done too I might add, thanks.

  • rosemaiden On Friday, February 3, 2012, rosemaiden (180)By person wrote:

    thanks tristan ^_^

  • dwells On Friday, February 3, 2012, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    I'm flattered (at least you didn't call me Walter!) thanks, Dan

  • rosemaiden On Friday, February 3, 2012, rosemaiden (180)By person wrote:

    Oh haha I just realized.....oops!...........sorry lol

  • haunted On Friday, February 3, 2012, haunted (837)By person wrote:

    awesome maiden, i swear every poem just gets better and better every time i read you. your poem really has an enchantingly dark feel to it. and i think it is just amazing! an excellent write you have here!

  • rosemaiden On Friday, February 3, 2012, rosemaiden (180)By person wrote:

    aw many thanks haunted!

  • Devilish On Friday, February 3, 2012, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Damn girl.. WOW! Your quite the daek one with this one.. I love that.. Scholar

  • rosemaiden On Friday, February 3, 2012, rosemaiden (180)By person wrote:

    why thank you :)


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