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Condemned Desires
By rosemaiden
I want to dance with the wind
I want to scream with the thunder
I want the oceans to rise up and take me under
Breathe into
me spirit
Breathe into me nature
Breathe into me strong and pure
Inject the souls lost
Inject the frigid frost
Inject
your darkness no matter the cost
Taint my skin with your love
Taint my heart even if it breaks
Taint my soul its never enough
I'll withstand the aches
Lust for me my demon
Lust for
my luscious human
Lust for the secrets hidden inside that you dare
to open
Kill me with your words of fire
Kill me with your
eyes of pain
Bring me back to life and please kill me again!
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Copyright 2012 rosemaiden
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A former member wrote:
" dance with the wind
scream with the thunder
oceans to rise up and take me under"
Excellent. I can see you on the beach with a storm approaching dancing and singing. Actually that sounds like a fun thing to do.
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On Saturday, February 4, 2012, rosemaiden
(185)
wrote:
lol i've done that but not on a beach and it is very fun
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On Friday, February 3, 2012, dwells
(4285) wrote:
RM I completely agree with Haunted in that your poetry is improving greatly as time goes on. Sounds like you're ready for a walk on the wild side with this one, cheers! And very well done too I might add, thanks.
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On Friday, February 3, 2012, rosemaiden
(185) wrote:
thanks tristan ^_^
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On Friday, February 3, 2012, dwells
(4285) wrote:
I'm flattered (at least you didn't call me Walter!) thanks, Dan
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On Friday, February 3, 2012, rosemaiden
(185) wrote:
Oh haha I just realized.....oops!...........sorry lol
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On Friday, February 3, 2012, haunted
(850) wrote:
awesome maiden, i swear every poem just gets better and better every time i read you. your poem really has an enchantingly dark feel to it. and i think it is just amazing! an excellent write you have here!
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On Friday, February 3, 2012, rosemaiden
(185) wrote:
aw many thanks haunted!
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On Friday, February 3, 2012, Devilish
(2658) wrote:
Damn girl.. WOW! Your quite the daek one with this one.. I love that..
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On Friday, February 3, 2012, rosemaiden
(185) wrote:
why thank you :)
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