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San Graal
By elisa
the dead ink bled a
shriek of silence -voiced over
a void
a dark star sank
in a hypothermic night
numb as never day
and black as soot silk snow
light
laid to rest
in the aftermath
of a nuclear winter -wonderland
.
.
.
blue blood seeping
pink -sound
(rupture)
the inner ear of the oarless
vessel
found guilty and filthy -nevertheless meant to be blessed
some kind of edited beauty
conceived illegitimately
as a feminine fallback to the first
bleed
free
tax dry
then die,
San Graal.
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Copyright 2011 elisa
Published on Monday, November 21, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "San Graal"
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A former member wrote:
there is such a tranquil flow to this poem. your use of aliteration is charming,enchanting. I kept getting lost in the flow/poetics, so trying to ascertain the concepts was hard. anyway, i can't justly express what i mean/feel so i'll just say- you should post more often elisa. much respect.
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A former member wrote:
To put words to what reading this invoked in me. I have a certain fondness for tales of the San Graal or Sangrael even if I'm not sure I believe in them.
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A former member wrote:
These words paralleled my consciousness as it sped past the Demi-Urge into the black void in search of the ultimate-mind.
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A former member wrote:
In the harsh numbness of the aboslute lack of heat the cold made my awareness more profound. The revelations were astonishing but I can never be sure if they are real.
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A former member wrote:
I'll stop rambling now. If poetry is in the interpretation then I hope my taking of your words does not offend.
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On Friday, January 27, 2006, elisa
(1616)
wrote:
this is the only reason i write.......i love to read other peoples interpretation of my thoughts.........my words are your words......i merely arrange them......this made my day.....thank you for this.
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On Monday, January 16, 2006, TheBardOfBlasphemy
(358) wrote:
this was chunky and slick... it was thick and funky... it was monkey and stick... it was ick and unky.
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On Monday, January 16, 2006, TheBardOfBlasphemy
(358) wrote:
really... i don't know what it was... except that it seemed powerfully evil and thus it was exceptionally good
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On Thursday, January 19, 2006, elisa
(1616) wrote:
San Graal also translates to Holy Grail.......maybe that helps:)
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On Sunday, December 18, 2005, lordshadow
(153) wrote:
the imagery was fucking breathtaking, and the wording was just so unique and I loved it... all of it.
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On Sunday, January 15, 2006, elisa
(1616) wrote:
thank you lordshadow........left a very vivid image in my mind as well.
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On Monday, November 21, 2005, Solace
(1069) wrote:
my god...this was like a war...so - so - calmly conclusive contrasted violence cut short and silenced with a hush...cease...amazing
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A former member wrote:
freaking amazing, to say the least, the imagery was astounding, beautifully written.
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A former member wrote:
"hypothermic night" "nuclear winter -wonderland" "edited beauty" This is perfection!
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On Monday, November 21, 2005, AniDayz
(820) wrote:
...youre a wonder, and never ceasing...spectacular
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A former member wrote:
Such edible words, the ancient place comes alive, it is immortalised.
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