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...slowly...fading...
By KittyStryker
sometimes...
when the sun is low
and the heart
follows suit
i sit alone
cold
and wonder
if i am just
a flicker
before
the
fall
i feel myself
fading
soft and slow
like a photograph
i wither
and grow
brittle
grey
slowly
i see myself
fading
...away...
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Copyright 2004 Bast
Published on Friday, March 5, 2004.
Filed under:
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On Sunday, March 1, 2015, heinzlet
(25)
wrote:
what a good poem, I love it in every way...
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On Sunday, April 8, 2012, SummerCoat
(29) wrote:
wow. i really dig this peice. simple yet so complex. it stirs something in me...i relate
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On Wednesday, February 18, 2009, KuroiBara
(16) wrote:
This is me right now, and i like the photo...The poem is beautiful
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On Tuesday, July 11, 2006, toy soldier
(26) wrote:
you my dear, are an artist in every way ...
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On Friday, October 28, 2005, Lady Grinning Soul
(143) wrote:
nice write i like the part about fading away
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On Tuesday, July 12, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
O.O ::Is speechless::
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On Tuesday, March 8, 2005, Jaded Jezzabelle
(328) wrote:
W. O. W. THIS MAY BE THE REALEST WORK OF ART I HAVE EVER HAD THE PLEASURE TO SEE.....
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A former member wrote:
this is so wonderful.. the slow ponderous almost disbelieving flow of your words accompanies the image entirely... all around beautiful
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A former member wrote:
i really like this. very powerful
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A former member wrote:
beautifuL! you have a way with art and words that i envy. you have a distant sound... -Miko-
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On Wednesday, April 14, 2004, stormtalk
(727) wrote:
Simple and beautiful, just the way I like it. I've seen you around for a long time, but have not yet read yoour work... perhaps I shall have to.
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On Wednesday, April 7, 2004, flying_fox
(571) wrote:
the visual is a great effect...perfect illustration for powerful words. Fox
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A former member wrote:
You are still a sexy wench!
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On Thursday, March 18, 2004, sic maggot
(1) wrote:
i can pertain to this, beautiful just beautiful, i love it
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On Sunday, March 14, 2004, Emptyness Inside Me
(171) wrote:
Hopefully your only fading away in thought and not reality here, this piece is great, good job ~Emptyness~
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On Friday, March 12, 2004, Exodus
(172) wrote:
oooo pretty!......very, very nice....i love it...
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On Wednesday, March 10, 2004, Mistress Morbid
(405) wrote:
This is awesome, not that you fading away is though...Morb
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On Sunday, March 7, 2004, BoldSolitude
(214) wrote:
Great piece, I liked the way you lined the words up along each side and then inbetween the slides making it look like a strip of old film at first glance. You have the artistic eye.
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On Saturday, March 6, 2004, Despairing Eyes
(7) wrote:
nice pic and great write....>Despair
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On Friday, March 5, 2004, hopeless
(51) wrote:
wow...... this is excellent work... and the picture is amazingly cool..... ~hopeless
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On Friday, March 5, 2004, Ravenblade
(307) wrote:
This piece leaves me speachless...very touching, keep up the awesome work
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On Friday, March 5, 2004, Jonas
(715) wrote:
the words like the photograph fade fade fade to grey. ...
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On Friday, March 5, 2004, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
such fabulously effective multimedia emotional poignancy... beautiful work. purr
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A former member wrote:
This is so...melancholy. I actually can hear these words with music. A slow drum beat with a low guitar...all very slow...and very depressing...it's amazing the emotions you tear from me.
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On Friday, March 5, 2004, Jaded Jezzabelle
(328) wrote:
I really am in awae of the way you used the pic to get your point across....excellent work....
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On Friday, March 5, 2004, KittyStryker
(710) wrote:
finally the picture's there! w00t.
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A former member wrote:
*picks heart up off the floor*... +T.P.U+
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On Friday, March 5, 2004, KittyStryker
(710) wrote:
heh... and the picture isn't even there yet. i must be talented.
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On Tuesday, May 4, 2004, Anth
(1126) wrote:
i like reading this from bottom to top best, the end result being perfection
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