...slowly...fading...

By KittyStryker

...slowly...fading...

sometimes...
when the sun is low
and the heart
follows suit

i sit alone
cold
and wonder
if i am just
a flicker
before
the
fall

i feel myself
fading
soft and slow

like a photograph
i wither
and grow
brittle
grey

slowly
i see myself

fading

...away...

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Copyright 2004 Bast
Published on Friday, March 5, 2004.     Filed under: "Graphic Art"
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  • heinzlet On Sunday, March 1, 2015, heinzlet (26)By person wrote:

    what a good poem, I love it in every way...

  • SummerCoat On Sunday, April 8, 2012, SummerCoat (29)By person wrote:

    wow. i really dig this peice. simple yet so complex. it stirs something in me...i relate

  • KuroiBara On Wednesday, February 18, 2009, KuroiBara (16)By person wrote:

    This is me right now, and i like the photo...The poem is beautiful

  • toy soldier On Tuesday, July 11, 2006, toy soldier (26)By person wrote:

    you my dear, are an artist in every way ...

  • Lady Grinning Soul On Friday, October 28, 2005, Lady Grinning Soul (145)By person wrote:

    nice write i like the part about fading away

  • Serenity On Tuesday, July 12, 2005, Serenity (469)By person wrote:

    O.O ::Is speechless::

  • Jaded Jezzabelle On Tuesday, March 8, 2005, Jaded Jezzabelle (328)By person wrote:

    W. O. W. THIS MAY BE THE REALEST WORK OF ART I HAVE EVER HAD THE PLEASURE TO SEE.....

  • A former member wrote: this is so wonderful.. the slow ponderous almost disbelieving flow of your words accompanies the image entirely... all around beautiful

  • A former member wrote: i really like this. very powerful

  • A former member wrote: beautifuL! you have a way with art and words that i envy. you have a distant sound... -Miko-

  • stormtalk On Wednesday, April 14, 2004, stormtalk (729)By person wrote:

    Simple and beautiful, just the way I like it. I've seen you around for a long time, but have not yet read yoour work... perhaps I shall have to.

  • flying_fox On Wednesday, April 7, 2004, flying_fox (573)By person wrote:

    the visual is a great effect...perfect illustration for powerful words. Fox

  • A former member wrote: You are still a sexy wench!

  • sic maggot On Thursday, March 18, 2004, sic maggot (1)By person wrote:

    i can pertain to this, beautiful just beautiful, i love it

  • Emptyness Inside Me On Sunday, March 14, 2004, Emptyness Inside Me (171)By person wrote:

    Hopefully your only fading away in thought and not reality here, this piece is great, good job ~Emptyness~

  • Exodus On Friday, March 12, 2004, Exodus (172)By person wrote:

    oooo pretty!......very, very nice....i love it...

  • Mistress Morbid On Wednesday, March 10, 2004, Mistress Morbid (405)By person wrote:

    This is awesome, not that you fading away is though...Morb

  • BoldSolitude On Sunday, March 7, 2004, BoldSolitude (214)By person wrote:

    Great piece, I liked the way you lined the words up along each side and then inbetween the slides making it look like a strip of old film at first glance. You have the artistic eye.

  • Despairing Eyes On Saturday, March 6, 2004, Despairing Eyes (7)By person wrote:

    nice pic and great write....>Despair

  • hopeless On Friday, March 5, 2004, hopeless (51)By person wrote:

    wow...... this is excellent work... and the picture is amazingly cool..... ~hopeless

  • Ravenblade On Friday, March 5, 2004, Ravenblade (313)By person wrote:

    This piece leaves me speachless...very touching, keep up the awesome work

  • Jonas On Friday, March 5, 2004, Jonas (720)By person wrote:

    the words like the photograph fade fade fade to grey. ...

  • purr_verse On Friday, March 5, 2004, purr_verse (1059)By person wrote:

    such fabulously effective multimedia emotional poignancy... beautiful work. purr

  • A former member wrote: This is so...melancholy. I actually can hear these words with music. A slow drum beat with a low guitar...all very slow...and very depressing...it's amazing the emotions you tear from me.

  • Jaded Jezzabelle On Friday, March 5, 2004, Jaded Jezzabelle (328)By person wrote:

    I really am in awae of the way you used the pic to get your point across....excellent work....

  • KittyStryker On Friday, March 5, 2004, KittyStryker (711)By person wrote:

    finally the picture's there! w00t.

  • A former member wrote: *picks heart up off the floor*... +T.P.U+

  • KittyStryker On Friday, March 5, 2004, KittyStryker (711)By person wrote:

    heh... and the picture isn't even there yet. i must be talented.

  • Anth On Tuesday, May 4, 2004, Anth (1133)By person wrote:

    i like reading this from bottom to top best, the end result being perfection


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