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Admittedly a Cutter
By cre
as the night falls
and darkness grows
I try to think of other things
but time seems painfully slow
across the room
the glint of a sharpened blade
catches my worried eyes
and suddenly everything fades
Lost in this world
I forget the words of my friends
I know what must be done
this tangled madness has to end
I reach for the instrument
the tool of my relief
Biting back a tear
I promise myself that it will be brief
I close my eyes
and I slash here and there
It's done, and I smile
Ohh! This style looks awesome on my HAIR!
haha! *chuckles*
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Copyright 2003 cre
Published on Tuesday, October 14, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Tuesday, July 20, 2021, carlosjackal
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wrote:
Haha..Brilliant :0)
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A former member wrote:
made me giggle and cringe because its funny yet ive been there
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On Friday, May 23, 2008, Niemand
(355) wrote:
Hehe
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On Tuesday, January 30, 2007, Daughter_Of_The_Moon
(106) wrote:
I missed your sense of humor. Glad to be back and reading your works again! -Heather-
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A former member wrote:
yep, i fell for it... what a twist!
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A former member wrote:
lol that was great
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On Tuesday, May 17, 2005, Graveyard_Desciple
(39) wrote:
ha ha, fuckin awesome!
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On Monday, April 11, 2005, so_skeevy
(64) wrote:
Sweet man. totally good.
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A former member wrote:
Saved by that last line!
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A former member wrote:
That was awesome lol. I totally fell for it. God one.
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A former member wrote:
hahahaha, love it! great write!
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A former member wrote:
Good job man!
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On Saturday, December 11, 2004, Im_going_to_cry_now
(24) wrote:
I applaud this poem
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On Wednesday, December 1, 2004, Malice In Wonderland
(976) wrote:
heh, And here I was prepaired to leave a bitchy comment...thanks for spairing the stale bs...love it
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On Wednesday, November 24, 2004, Rone4611
(121) wrote:
That was hallarious! Great write.
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A former member wrote:
haha that was very clever. i loved the twist it was very funny and i laughed every time i read it. amazing.
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A former member wrote:
nice! i've read this poem several times, and never once has it not made me laugh! great ;)
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On Thursday, September 9, 2004, Zara Synn
(57) wrote:
Ah, you had me going there for a minute! hehe. Awesome twist.
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On Friday, September 3, 2004, mysticventures
(527) wrote:
excellent jest!!
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On Friday, September 3, 2004, Jonas
(715) wrote:
clever clever ;-)
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On Friday, September 3, 2004, CorruptedLittleGirl
(243) wrote:
*laughs* This is awesome! Bravo!
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A former member wrote:
sehr gut. great (anti)climax
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On Saturday, July 10, 2004, Storm
(143) wrote:
hehe, how sneaky sneaky of you.´Good one.
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On Friday, April 2, 2004, Lemons
(46) wrote:
I enjoy this poem uber much!
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A former member wrote:
Yeah, awesome write, I can't say anything that hasnt been said already so I'll just leave it at that...
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On Saturday, January 31, 2004, Mindless fairy
(8) wrote:
This is great! gotta love it! ~~The Mindless One~~
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On Saturday, November 15, 2003, sole
(93) wrote:
hah the ol bait and switch. I was all ready to get cloudy eyed and you dropped a bomb. Well done.
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On Tuesday, November 11, 2003, finaldestiny
(72) wrote:
omg this has got to be this best poem! absolutly perfect!~finaldestiny~
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On Saturday, October 25, 2003, Drea
(1388) wrote:
LMAO... i was all.."hummm cre? a cutter?" yeah ok this was just too funny.. i'm still rolling. ~Drea~
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On Saturday, October 25, 2003, Trichotillomaniac
(42) wrote:
Love it! You made it sound as if you were upset in the beginning. I'm sure you're hair does look AWESOME!
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A former member wrote:
HHAAA. Love it. I was a little worried with the title but I love this. Great job. You've lightened my spirits. *n*a*
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On Tuesday, October 21, 2003, Seraphic
(209) wrote:
hehe priceless, i love it *~seraph~*
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On Tuesday, October 21, 2003, Delphoid-Q
(213) wrote:
Hehehe... *falls on the floor and starts laughing harder*. Bri-llli-ant ;)
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On Saturday, October 18, 2003, manywalks
(747) wrote:
Hehehehe, ah, thank you, I needed that. ~ mw
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On Saturday, October 18, 2003, Loserland
(113) wrote:
i sense the sarcasm but you play it perfectly...well done
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On Wednesday, October 15, 2003, yslehc
(334) wrote:
lol awsome i love it
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On Wednesday, October 15, 2003, Daughter_Of_The_Moon
(106) wrote:
wery well done :)
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On Wednesday, October 15, 2003, Daughter_Of_The_Moon
(106) wrote:
a laugh needed.
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On Wednesday, October 15, 2003, TheMistressBucket
(18) wrote:
Hahaha! How fucking cool! You had me going for a sec...What a lovely twist! ;)
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On Wednesday, October 15, 2003, GreekPhilosopher
(156) wrote:
Hehehe... Finally, A Cutter Poem I Can Actually Read. Thanks, GPhD.
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On Wednesday, October 15, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(509) wrote:
Wit at its best! hehe...of course I had to go back and reread a second time just for a full belly laugh. Funnier yet...hehe...I did that once! Got mad and chopped off my hair!! hehe...I loved this! ~JMDW~
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On Tuesday, October 14, 2003, GothicBlack
(186) wrote:
HAHAHA! this one's great! i love the ending... perfect. ~gothic~
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On Tuesday, October 14, 2003, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
God damn you Jane, had me going for a bit. I was afraid I'd have to leave you a nasty comment :-D. Heh, good stuff.
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