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The Skin of Station Sue Sue
By lupus tenebrae
Shelter
roof; corrugated
wrinkles shudder in the breeze
...
skin, like pressed obsidian, shone
lustrous with the February sun.
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Copyright 2016 lupus tenebrae
Published on Wednesday, March 2, 2016.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
A minimal piece written out of boredom whilst waiting for my best friend at the park.Comments on "The Skin of Station Sue Sue"
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A former member wrote:
Short but very mesmerizing awesome job-Mrk
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A former member wrote:
Minimal but the goal was certainly met. Great piece!
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On Thursday, March 3, 2016, Dark Chocolate
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wrote:
Very descriptive, Marvelous
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A former member wrote:
Terse but tantalizing with vforced isual perception. Excellent word selection and with an economy of words, the theme has been exprressed. Very well done.
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