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Will I Ever
By cre
will I ever wake
gently, as the dawn breaks
as melancholy blue gives way to sunkissed hues
and dappled drops of light sift softly into view
will I ever rise
with quiet laughter in my eyes
a smile to grace my often solemn face
or will I find I always bow to ever-present hate
will I ever love
or in turn, be loved enough
to finally believe, and convince my eyes to see
that after all, there might be something good in me
the valleys of a crashing winter's tide
beckon and I fall inside
mighty ocean swells swallow every tear I've cried
I pray to sink - I gave my best - I tried
will I ever fade
with the tranquil end of day
will the sun that burns my eyes, drift and slowly die
and will peace, all I've ever sought -
finally be mine.
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Copyright 2003 cre
Published on Sunday, September 7, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Will I Ever"
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A former member wrote:
You will never fade. You are dark poetry. Much respect.
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A former member wrote:
A lot of meaning to each line and I can relate to almost every word...beautiful.
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On Sunday, February 10, 2013, Star
(919)
wrote:
i have asked myself the same question, before. i will never know the answer until it happens. beautiful post and imagery (:
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On Sunday, February 10, 2013, Devilish
(2657) wrote:
as melancholy blue gives way to sunkissed hues and dappled drops of light sift softly into view.. beautiful . beautiful..
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On Wednesday, October 31, 2012, MorganaRose
(74) wrote:
I have read this several times and I'm sure I'll read it many more. I can relate..but more than that I think you beautifully expressed yourself. Your peace will come.
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On Monday, April 5, 2004, BoldSolitude
(214) wrote:
Very good portrayel of soul searching. I especially related to the last line of stanza's 2-4 and the entire last stanza
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On Saturday, September 20, 2003, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
In a light filled rift, A soul of beauty was seen, I was but hiden, Yet it was meant to be, In light and apart, This soul touched my heart. Tiger
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A former member wrote:
You know what? Yes...You get what you deserve. That's what keeps me going. And one day, it will happen. Your beautiful Cre, so don't think otherwise!
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On Sunday, September 7, 2003, Ophelia
(221) wrote:
this sounds like the way I feel, I just want to be happy and laugh with out feeling it is all fixing come falling down around me, , , ,O.
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A former member wrote:
simply fantastic. no adjectives... Will I ever is a sentence with lots of meanings. ***
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On Sunday, September 7, 2003, DoctorAsh
(373) wrote:
cre - my angel of un-dusty: poetry + [question] + structure = emotional outlet [fences surround our houses] why? [D&A]
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On Sunday, September 7, 2003, Six-Out
(1435) wrote:
You will do all of these, exept fade. Someone as wonderful as you, deserves everything there is to give. And someone like you...could never fade, jane. Never.
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On Sunday, September 7, 2003, The Fallen Angel
(235) wrote:
you have changed my torment into a smile...+Fallen One+
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