Star-crossed in Perigee
By lupus tenebrae
Dear temptress,
Your orbit found perigee,
the way the devil found elixir
and I found your hypnotic spell
all the more entrancing;
exotic in Central American ways,
dangerous, like the prophecies between us
being lost in some errant punctuation.
Making love on a psychic level,
astral projections of each others arms,
teasing the locks between our fingertips
like feeding thread through a needle's eye.
I sink into a delicate form of vivisepulture,
coming to rest in pieces of dreaming,
still clasping a shallow, ghostly hand,
as if it were familiar skin.
The emptiness of limbo is second only
to existing parallel to a lover,
the two never able to meet,
the fork in the road, a lonelier crossing.
Let me count the ways, again,
a supernova resembles retreating
from your lips, the way
the tide takes one more look to shore
before all the world is an ocean;
it's the same look I gave
before I almost forgot a face.
Your Special, star-crossed one
Author's Note:
Another gushy poetic letter, to the same someone as the last.Comments on "Star-crossed in Perigee"
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A former member wrote:
This was stunning to read! Fuelled with emotion, and in turn it flowed beautifully. 10
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On Monday, December 17, 2012, Oliver Twisted
(53) wrote:
very imaginative! explosive write!
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A former member wrote:
This is so beautiful, I found myself caught up in every line.
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On Sunday, December 16, 2012, PoetessDarkly
(693) wrote:
wow great awesome wonderful stupendice, and any other adjective I can think of! the imagery is flawless
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On Sunday, December 16, 2012, Strataic
(99) wrote:
Ah, but the visuals are beautiful, in this easy flow, lovely. thanks.