Blah blah, poetry. Blah blah, love.

By Dreaming in Stanzas

Erotic eroticisms
It's in the sighs between the lines
and the loving way your fingers
tap
tap
the keys
and coax the beauty out of similes
that are way past their prime

I tell myself that I don't know how to love you
and that these are just scars on the screen
of my ever so fucked up life
But when you caress those letters
the crushing cresendo
and the climax of your words
read me like a sitcky note

But really, it's all semantics
I just want you to know that each time you hit that spacebar
I'm slipping in between your thoughts

And I'm tasting your soul.

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Copyright 2012 Dreaming in Stanzas
Published on Monday, August 27, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • TropicalSnowstorm On Friday, November 16, 2012, TropicalSnowstorm (1580)By person wrote:

    Great piece! I especially loved the line "coax the beauty out of similes that are way past their prime". Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • dwells On Sunday, September 9, 2012, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Metaphorically marvellous, the Poetry Man perhaps, working his verbal magic with the dance of words, cheers!

  • FadedBlues On Tuesday, August 28, 2012, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...gotta love lyrical lust...

  • xZombie Poptartzx On Tuesday, August 28, 2012, xZombie Poptartzx (332)By person wrote:

    I know this feeling all to well.. lucky guy indeed :) Loved the style of this one! Great job as always ♥

  • Devilish On Monday, August 27, 2012, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    I'm killing him.lol. you are the queen baby. I love you so much it hurts my thoughts. lucky one. kisses. . Scholar

  • eidos On Monday, August 27, 2012, eidos (40)By person wrote:

    A lucky guy indeed. This was oozing with emotion and eroticism. Truly blended the mundane with the exotic, without crossing the line into tacky. Great write.

  • Nehema On Monday, August 27, 2012, Nehema (958)By person wrote:

    Lucky guy... Coxing beauty out of similes...very nice. Always a pleasure to read you - XXOO Scholar


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