DaVinci Lied.

By Malice In Wonderland

incremental
these
clock hands
sluggishly
slide by
pushing past hours
indifferent
and apathetic
of the ozone
featherlight
and crushing the air
from our lungs
curling through
crooked digit
daily.struggle
cramped
and arthritic
straighten out
those gnarled joints
(it's like gifting the blind with sight, but with less realism involved)

we breath in
sliver shot
silver sunrise
melodies
defeaning
like the antique silences
littering the corridor

I
am no one

nothing
but
broken
thoughts
clinging to broken magnetics
rearranging
sympathies
and daydreams
because

silly
love

us dreamers,
(we do it best.)

our art
shields us
always
illustrating
something better
than
the realities

that truly
show
us

how broken
we really are

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Copyright 2013 Malice In Wonderland
Published on Tuesday, May 14, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Void Vortex On Monday, February 8, 2016, Void Vortex (298)By person wrote:

    Beautiful. :)

  • Tagen On Monday, February 1, 2016, Tagen (112)By person wrote:

    Killer last 3 stanzas. Brava!

  • A former member wrote: Very good piece, Kya. The first part reminded me how I started to smoke. The second part reminded me of an asylum. The third, of freedom.

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Friday, May 17, 2013, TropicalSnowstorm (1580)By person wrote:

    Great piece! Love the flow to this one. Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • Devilish On Friday, May 17, 2013, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    well fuck me. how do you comment on a brilliant piece. i'm fuck um. blown away for the second time today. rain you are a queen baby. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Hmm we certainly can get lost in our own fantasies and heads, a refuge for when reality is just a tiny bit too much. Beautiful write. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Love the ending, and how it is put together... You're talented. Scholar

  • NikesRain On Tuesday, May 14, 2013, NikesRain (1240)By person wrote:

    you take my breath away and still my heart with a silken gloved hand.... indeed we dreamers... this aches and breaks in the most perfect of ways

  • Star On Tuesday, May 14, 2013, Star (879)By person wrote:

    so many lines in this poem is just beyond brilliancy, and the truth. god, i love this, kya... 10/10 (:

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