Evening Personified

By lupus tenebrae

 



Shadows, in standing room only
watching the fog
drift by the street lamps,
the train whistles, taunting them
somewhere farther down the road.

The slightest hint of red
of nectar suspended in droplets,
rubies doubling as prisms,
refract the way homeward,

Leaving the air itself
to bite at nothing,
to clench the void in its teeth,
grappling stars with its maw.

They shiver, twinkling
beneath their fission,
envying the kerosene
placed light years out of reach. 

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Copyright 2012 lupus tenebrae
Published on Wednesday, August 22, 2012.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Nothing special, just an idea I couldn't get off of my mind. Maybe that in turn, makes it special?
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  • drasticdaydreams On Thursday, March 5, 2015, drasticdaydreams (55)By person wrote:

    This imagery was magical and alive.

  • A former member wrote: An idea which can't escape your mind is a very special one, indeed. This was excellent as always, man.

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