.combustion.
By Six-Out
tick.
click. lighter-
flicker. to boom. on this
cigarette.
click. like a pen-
sent to write a poem. but
it's caught.
click. like a second hand-
spinning around a face to count
down.
click. like these keys
pounding letters to make hearts
faulter.
c.l.ick-
I can taste the smoke
in the air around this paper as
I write words that mean
absolutely nothing.
so I click.
this pen closed.
and hit
these keys.
to say
hold.
on.
tock.
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Copyright 2012 Six-Out
Published on Tuesday, August 21, 2012.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Thursday, September 7, 2017, SolApathy
(652) wrote:
I can taste this poem in my soul..
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On Sunday, November 20, 2016, Drea
(1388) wrote:
I miss you, jerk!
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On Wednesday, January 6, 2016, Lab Rat
(124) wrote:
In but a second. Bravo.
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On Sunday, November 8, 2015, Asura
(15) wrote:
Dynamic motionless picture. Almoast alive. Its "combusting" ...
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On Saturday, January 3, 2015, asphyxia
(56) wrote:
Miss you terribly...
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A former member wrote:
Bow in the presents of greatness. Good play on words
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On Friday, May 30, 2014, soul_versing
(774) wrote:
I love the sentiment tied up in the idea of what it is that inspires us to write. I know that for me, the idea of putting thoughts to written words flows naturally if my atmosphere around me is gloomy. That goes for even my happiest of writes. What an enjoyable read. -TGÂ Â Â Â Â
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On Saturday, September 28, 2013, slow.burn.star
(84) wrote:
6out. Come back. :)
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On Saturday, September 28, 2013, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
You first. :)
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On Friday, November 23, 2012, bpathos
(77) wrote:
Life between the seconds is un linear. I like this.
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On Monday, October 8, 2012, PoeticHellion
(191) wrote:
Everything you write still makes me shake. This just is more proof.
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On Tuesday, October 2, 2012, Dilated View
(582) wrote:
This felt frantic to me. As though if the words would just come you would have the perspective you need but time works against you. May be off in my understanding but enjoyed it all the same.
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On Saturday, September 29, 2012, Malice In Wonderland
(976) wrote:
I'm not sure what to say... this was quick and pointed. almost sharp and painful.... but amazing, as always
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A former member wrote:
"and hit these keys to say 'hold on'." you are quite a bit more amazing than you think, jon. please, if nothing else, know that someone believes in you.
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On Tuesday, August 21, 2012, Beautiful Incidental
(38) wrote:
this was the voice in my head my last night ...
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On Tuesday, August 21, 2012, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
I'm not sure if that's a good thing..
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On Tuesday, August 21, 2012, lovechild
(43) wrote:
This is dark and hinting of disturbing things. I like it. So disturb us more please!