Victim of Design

By lupus tenebrae

 



Not even procuring
the slightest sympathies
despite being obvious,
subliminal and all.

Modesty begets
the chilly glances
of peanut gallery catapults
ready for assault.

Defend the walls or
all that’s left of ruined graves
and barricades.
Shrapnel in needle precision,

In surgical garbs,
does quite the lobotomy.
Words are like gauze
no matter who wraps the wound.

Come hither now,
with B-Movie pitchforks,
with Styrofoam torches,
and acting that rivals gravity.

For I am your monster,
your mismatch amalgam,
and also, your salvation!
Sorry, I jest.

Take heed, however,
the perfection you seek
is just as misshapen as I…
 

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Copyright 2012 lupus tenebrae
Published on Monday, June 25, 2012.     Filed under: "Ironic" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

*Repost* How I could all but forget this one, is beyond me. Still remains one of my favorite free-verse pieces.
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  • A former member wrote: love your choice of words. lobotomy one of my fave words :)

  • A former member wrote: A top piece I remember well. Makes the mind wander...cerebral work. I've always liked this one a whole lot. I think you write free verse well. Needle sharp write.

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