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Windermere Dreams
By RubyXero
I peeled back the petals
of the flower
nostalgia...
Its
scent was refreshing
colors vibrant
but the aftertaste...
left my throat choking
on the memories
of a beautiful
and
innocent life,
long forgotten...
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Copyright 2012 RubyXero
Author's Note:
trying to remember my dreams and understand the symbology of them...Awards
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A former member wrote:
Stopping to smell the roses. Choking on the fragrance of beauty and innocence. You've said a lot in just a few simple sentences. Good stuff.
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On Tuesday, May 14, 2013, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703)
wrote:
"the aftertaste... left my throat choking" - interesting picture and a great contrast to the positive scent and color. I like this one very much! Ciao, T/S
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A former member wrote:
The flower nostalgia...I believe I have loved her a few too many times.
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A former member wrote:
wonderful write... wondering what dreams mean? do you actually mean "the symbology" they contain? or just the symbology of visions in them? Id like to know more about that... your poem was beautiful.
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On Tuesday, June 26, 2012, Nehema
(959) wrote:
This spoke to me as I feel I'm waking up after sleepwalking through life for 10 years. Beautiful simple wording, much enjoyed - XXOO
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On Sunday, June 17, 2012, Alchemist
(688) wrote:
This poem unravels with simple beauty.
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On Sunday, June 17, 2012, FadedBlues
(2168) wrote:
...sounds like something dark lurking behind the beauty & innocence. dreams tell us things that we dont expect...
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A former member wrote:
RubyXero love this poem. Dreams are so allusive at time it hard to pin down what they mean but you did a good job here.
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On Tuesday, June 5, 2012, dwells
(4284) wrote:
One by one perhaps, he loves me, he loves me not... We'll always wonder about what might have been, thanks Ruby.
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On Tuesday, June 5, 2012, haunted
(849) wrote:
very interesting topic, and sometimes dream interpritation can be black and white. i used to have a book of definitions on symbolizism of dreams and it was helpful because some dreams make no sense! but others have a very clear secret to be had. its very intersting though. i recommend a book of dream meanings. its fascinating to know. its almost like a psyhcic reading or getting a tarot done! awesome poem ruby.
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