The Watcher
By sixsixnine
It is inevitable,
to fall in love with you.
It is an inexcusable,
ludicrous, voluptuous, lunatic,
inside
So sacred our head
full of love, courage and compassion.
There are only fragments of dead,
wasted and full of hatred.
There are only a few,
who will do what we need to.
Let us decipher the lies and the phony cries
before , before we die...
So it is a rhyme that I crave to put it all away
Surrogate
Prostate
Devious
Oblivious
Candidate
The audacity of letting these fuckers lead,
When they cannot see, you or me...
Counterfeit
Redemption
Congratulation
Resurrection
New direction
contemplation
intention
reflection
I don't want to be paralyzed
unable to recognize
what lies inside
is all but my
demise
Hey beautiful
Take your chance, and dance...
with that old romance...
Circumstance is the balance
of the most meaningful poetic utterance.
Behold I hold the infinite universe in a microscopic piece of my finger...
Bigger still are the dreams that linger...
Rain drops the size of Jupiter.
Evaporate way too late.
Flooding the milky way,
with...
Toxic Creature.
Artificial Nature.
Followed the sign
to find the divine
Sublime elegance
of this existence.
I am the reactor
I am the watcher
It is not always clear
and it is not always real
and I can hear your cry
and you can heal yourself
and I can affect you
see your fear disappear
Comments on "The Watcher"
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On Thursday, April 16, 2009, mysticventures
(527) wrote:
incredible piece of work - absolutely your best I've read - wow
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On Friday, April 10, 2009, ebonyamore
(100) wrote:
powerful churning motion in this. restlessness and contempt-laced lust. The first stanza caught me and didn't let me go until after the last word. and i did love that first stanza. feelings that i know well. thanks for the great read!
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On Wednesday, February 4, 2009, RubyXero
(481) wrote:
this was amazing. loved the whole thing! but that stanza that starts, " I don't want to be paralyzed unable to recognize " really stuck out for me. wow! just amazing.
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On Sunday, February 1, 2009, The Lipstick Factor
(287) wrote:
Holyhell well done is right! I'd really like to hear this read aloud to see if it matched the natural rhythm it took on as I got deeper into it. This is a really cool write--kudos, really well done.
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A former member wrote:
Holyhell well done.. I'm not normally a fan of rhyme but you pulled this off perfectly. " The audacity of letting these fuckers lead, When they cannot see you, or me.." Exactly. This is brilliant. ~Lost
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A former member wrote:
Caught in a cross-fire of surreal and reality,..to and fro: all we ever wanted was to 'feel'...a descriptive collage of bits and pieces,...well planned.
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On Tuesday, January 20, 2009, sixsixnine
(476) wrote:
Thank You Very Much Poets ~matt
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On Tuesday, January 20, 2009, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
goodness... loved the infinite universe and jupiter lines but the whole was breath stealing... like swimming in a whirlpool yet wanting to just become part of it and let it carry you along...
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On Saturday, January 17, 2009, LiP Stiches
(42) wrote:
"I don't want to be paralyzed unable to recognize what lies inside is all but my demise "......love these lines they make my soul quiver and agree!
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A former member wrote:
.............psychedelic......yea in its entire meaning.LOVING THIS!!!!!
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On Wednesday, January 14, 2009, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
*hold(sorry).
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On Wednesday, January 14, 2009, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
'behold i hole the infinite universe in a microscopic piece of my finger ... bigger still are the dreams that linger raindrops the size of jupiter. evaporate way too late. flooding the milky way ...' the whole of this is like diving into the belly of a jelly fish. and breathing. and coming out alive.
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On Wednesday, January 14, 2009, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
damn...
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On Wednesday, January 14, 2009, snakeskingrin
(59) wrote:
should the object of such intense interest be honored or afraid??