*Not Worth the Words, William
By Sketso
I wandered, lonely...
no vales, no hills, just floating,
And life, below, was a still shot
forever hung in black and white
Lake shores and trees
held still, no breeze...
with a magnificent splash of yellow
stuck in time, between fluttering moments
and I, the forbidden observer,
unable to escape the scene
Ten thousand memories
glowing brightly in bleak surroundings,
yearning to be free, to dance,
yet conquered by my withering stare
a never-ending line
marking ticks with their tocks
from the end of my nose...
to eternity
It's been said
that "A poet could not but be gay,
in such a jocund company"
yet, with this sight along the bay...
I felt nothing remotely reminiscent
of a smirk, not a smidge, didn't smile
that, dear friend, is exactly when it hit me,
sudden squalor, I imagined petals trembling
for if such a sight could not move me
then I must not be what I claimed
I am no poet, don't mark me as such
for all I do is wander
lonely, as a cloud, casting shadows
on every daffodil I meet
**response work to, and quotation from "I wandered lonely as a cloud"
by William Wordsworth, 1804
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Comments on "*Not Worth the Words, William"
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On Sunday, May 20, 2018, Jonas Robinson
(848) wrote:
Thought-provoking. Deep.
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A former member wrote:
Thanks for this beautiful poem. Amazing and keep writing
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On Thursday, March 12, 2009, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
Faultless.
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A former member wrote:
this was simply your best piece I've ever read!!! well done!!! ~ hdb.
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A former member wrote:
Aaaaand another 10! :D
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A former member wrote:
I love this. I can feel every word you write.
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On Tuesday, February 3, 2009, RubyXero
(481) wrote:
this was an amazing piece. great imagery and description. almost like floating behind you in your mind.
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A former member wrote:
yes you are. . . a poet; and many other things beautiful as well. what a vivid and real write. choking with clarity. . .. and handwrought fire of soemthing that needs redemption and such a souling search, i cant even begin....wordsworthian indeed; but so much better. b/c its raw and open and upending in all the w.rite ways. . . blessings for you everywhere +nessa
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On Tuesday, February 3, 2009, Echoes of Orpheus
(357) wrote:
Reading this reminds me that I haven't been reading enough recently, damn midterms... Great piece Sketso. Depressive imagery within nature, like this is the setting of the world you know.