Can i Love tonight?

By Rebel tiGer King

Can I hold your hand tonight?
Softly undressing your mind to me.
Showing me who you are,
Naked in the night.
Let me read the pages of your body,
Covered in lavender fields.
Ready for me to rest my head on your lap,
A pillow between my dreams and nightmares.

Your body speaks to me,
And I listen to the volumes
spoken by your hips.

Can i taste your thoughts tonight?
Slowly unwinding the clock of your existance.
Because i want this moment,
You and I.
To last forever.

Let me Love tonight,
Unwrap myself before your image,
mirrored scars,
toungless hymns
burnt cigaretts.

All thats left of me
i give to you.

Make me whole again.

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Copyright 2010 Rebell tiGer King
Published on Sunday, January 24, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Sin On Monday, August 9, 2010, Sin (1168)By person wrote:

    well damn...it takes a lot to strike me wordless but hell if you havent done it..soft and sensual, and what an offering with an edge of needed acceptance. this left me with a smile..utterly lovely ~tips hat

  • A former member wrote: "All thats left of me i give to you.Make me whole again" simply delicious. to me this poem was quite romantic with like a tinge of sadness. i could feel it. i liked it alot.

  • sIo On Sunday, January 24, 2010, sIo (926)By person wrote:

    this is lovely....i don't know what else to say hun

  • A former member wrote: *cocks head* I can think of nothing, absolutely nothing besides wow...~Moony

  • A former member wrote: "A pillow between my dreams and nightmares" Extremely well put.


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