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para | dice
By elisa
birth brings life
with a promise of death
.
and judging by the size
of the world wide population
.
.
God is growing tired
of the
human being
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Copyright 2005 elisa
Published on Sunday, August 7, 2005.
Filed under: "Philosophical" and
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
no doubt... I sometimes think that life is losing meaning simply because it is capitalism... the more lives ther are the less each one is worth, the more death there must be.... hmmmmmmm intriguing lines
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On Saturday, August 27, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy
(358)
wrote:
i promise that i will never die......... and i'm tired of god
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On Saturday, August 27, 2005, elisa
(1616) wrote:
*breathes a sigh of relief* :)
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A former member wrote:
Heh you didn't waste any words with this, superbly crafted. Very awsome. ~Ship!
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On Thursday, August 25, 2005, elisa
(1616) wrote:
concise and brutal....that's exactly what i thought.
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On Saturday, August 13, 2005, Serenity
(469) wrote:
Insightful. I don't blame him either.
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On Sunday, August 21, 2005, suicideseason
(1639) wrote:
Her.
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On Tuesday, August 23, 2005, elisa
(1616) wrote:
*demonic grin*..... you nailed it like a priest to an altar boy ..........my elucidator;)
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On Wednesday, August 10, 2005, peril_notion
(88) wrote:
How could they not grow tired of our manipulative antics?
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On Sunday, August 7, 2005, vaultgrl
(185) wrote:
who wouldn't be, we don't exactly give ourselves a good reputation as a whole...good write
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On Sunday, August 7, 2005, Forgotten Angel
(310) wrote:
this makes sense....and its true for the most part..but ikd...refreshing reading..love it! :) -Kel
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On Sunday, August 7, 2005, Northstar
(375) wrote:
nicely done--unexpected and fresh
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A former member wrote:
Interesting spin on world population. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you.
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