Comments by Lylani
- "Reading this through again with yours and Narcissa's comments and interpretation, added a whole new dimension to this work for me. As when I wrote it I intended the title as in, You can't teach an old dog new tricks - There are some lovers that get past your defenses and once they're there you can't then learn to not feel for them. Thank you for sharing your thoughts its so enlightening to see others responses to my work"
Posted by Lylani on "Old dog" by Lylani
- "'Because I'm afraid
that I'm not worth the risk,' for some reason those lines shook me. Very heartfelt honest write"
Posted by Lylani on "Scared of Everything" by Phoenix
- "This is so in your head in a chaotic, instant snap shot kind of way, its an amazing write as it follows through without loosing focus but at the same time not seeming edited or forced "
Posted by Lylani on "Angry Persona" by Soldier Of Silence
- "Due to my lack of musical ability I tend to find it really hard to read lyrics, but this I really liked, particularly the chorus, it seems a really raw honest write. Good work!"
Posted by Lylani on "More than this" by Vampixie
- "A very perceptive piece, with a smile worthy sprinkling of dry wit, I especially liked 'In our own ways we're all just
jerking off the weekend,
trying to make it come faster.'
and the clock image at the end
"
Posted by Lylani on "Midnight Eclipse." by Echoes of Orpheus
- "Awesome write, I remember years ago when I lived at home & I used to post here I was terrified my mum would read my work, she would have freaked. Now I'm all grown up and still no-one I really know reads my work, I guess I'm still scared they'll belittle it...hmm"
Posted by Lylani on "Mother" by Demosthenes
- "I find the form of this very seductive, And the write itself simplistic beauty, very well done"
Posted by Lylani on "The Swan" by mysticventures
- "No I don't think I'm remotely pure, but sometimes I wake up an optimist and a romantic. But more often I crave experience and give no thought to morals."
Posted by Lylani on "Water Cycle" by Lylani
- "Despite a few technical difficulties hence the time delay, as requested I've put my photo (with my son John) back up on my profile "
Posted by Lylani on "Reaching For Daydreams" by Lylani
- "This has such beautiful and unusual imagery, I really enjoyed reading this, particularly "Wearing black suede
and a fresh crimson heartbreak
on a silk bow tie. " "
Posted by Lylani on "A clumsy simple confession " by estherbell
- "You take such vivid images that I would think could never make a poem of love and mold them into a truly beautiful love poem, an amazing talent and an amazing piece"
Posted by Lylani on "A piece of me for you" by Leith Plunkett
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