Will you?

By dark faery

Tell me how you feel
Let me into your heart
Give me your love
Share your dreams
Will you let me be your everything?
So tell me will you?

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© 2008 blbhd
Published on Thursday, September 25, 2008.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Lylani On Thursday, February 5, 2009, Lylani (112)By person wrote:

    Heart wrenching in its directness

  • NikesRain On Friday, September 26, 2008, NikesRain (1240)By person wrote:

    a brave and bold question... one not many will ask with sincerity but one many wish to have have asked... nicely done

  • A former member wrote: That's a lot to ask for...

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